webnovel
DaoistxYTRJ0
DaoistxYTRJ0Author2yr
2022-09-03 22:12

How difficult it is to open one's heart after someone betrays them? This is my story about Nivritti who has locked her heart after a betrayal but finds love in a famous idol but the catch is he is younger than her. Will they find love in each other? To those who have read the story, left a review, have given me a power stone, thank you so much. Keep reading and enjoy.

To Kiss An Idol

DaoistxYTRJ0
4.7
697 Chs

Liked by 7 people

LIKE
Replies4
DaoistySOUMu
DaoistySOUMuLv2

Hi I love your novel its amazing! am wonder if you can check out mine too, I want to know what you think about it. I would be happy if to u can give me a feed back.

1yr
1
DaoistxYTRJ0
DaoistxYTRJ0Author

Thank you for your kind words. I would happy to check your book out. Please share the link.

DaoistySOUMu:Hi I love your novel its amazing! am wonder if you can check out mine too, I want to know what you think about it. I would be happy if to u can give me a feed back.
1yr
1
DaoistEN5Bob
DaoistEN5BobLv1

This is one of the best novels i read during my 4 year novel reading journey. don't mind if i ask is this translated novel or ur own written novel? can u please reply to this?

1yr
1
DaoistxYTRJ0
DaoistxYTRJ0Author

Thank you so much for spending your precious time on my book. And to answer your question, this is my original work. I hope you keep enjoying it.

DaoistEN5Bob:This is one of the best novels i read during my 4 year novel reading journey. don't mind if i ask is this translated novel or ur own written novel? can u please reply to this?
1yr
Other Reviews
Merci_Douglas
Merci_DouglasLv3

I love anything K–! The theme is beautiful, and the blurb struck me as sweet but when I read the first chapter I had a strong feeling it would be powerful and sweet. And love that the girl is indian! Also I was so relieved with how neat and easy your write up was! Keeping pushing author, you can do it!

2yr

JS0916
JS0916Lv11

This is an amazing romantic story on the backdrop of kpop scene. This would be fun to read as FL is elder than ML. the story development is good and character design is awesome. Keep updating author.

2yr
gulu_gulu666
gulu_gulu666Lv1

turns out to be a romantic story between an older woman and a young man! The love between a famous idol and an ordinary woman is really interesting! I've added it to the library and will continue reading it again.

2yr
PRINCE_0F_DARKNESS
PRINCE_0F_DARKNESSLv4

Such a good story ....i totally liked it and suggest it to everyone ...

6mth
Supreme_manga
Supreme_mangaLv2

the chapters are good, no info dump, fast paced and interesting !!!! webnovel is dead if this novel is not ranked among top books, lol 😆 kudos to you, author

11mth
AuthorTeemah
AuthorTeemahLv4

Am in love with this book sincerely, Weldon work Author keep it up kudos to you Author

1yr
Author_4357
Author_4357Lv13

How should I explain this story? The characters are excellent. The pacing of story is marvellous. The description used by writer is on point. I want to read more and more about the FL. I will wait for her backstory eagerly. In the meantime, author is doing a very good job

2yr
Dehni_Olsen
Dehni_OlsenLv14

World setting: Very realistic and on point. I could easily see this as either an anime or tv series. It was cute and very well described. I was somewhat confused about why the FL had to run away and I was lost a bit on how easy it was for her to leave everything behind. I would have loved a little more explanation. However, I could vividly see the characters place of work and the stairway of kissing. All in all the world setting flowed very well. 4 stars Character design and development: The author gave chapter one as a descriptor of her characters. I thought this unique and a good way to keep readers up to date on her characters. Sadly, I did find myself looking for more descriptions of the characters inside the actual chapters though. And then I became super excited when I got one as the author does explain things well when details are given. The progression and the back and forth between the FL and ML was great! So although I wished for a bit more detail sometimes, the Development won this section. 5 stars Plot: As I only read 10 chapters I can’t say for certain what my thoughts are regarding plot. This story has great potential however and I’m excited to see where it goes. With only the first 10 chapters in mind, 5 stars. Writing style: What I normally have issues with, when it comes to novels on WebNovel is the sentence and word structure. I have a hard time getting past chapter one normally. While there were some areas that this happened, it was pretty mild. Sadly, the author does tend to suffer from mild Repetition. The author reused the same words several times. As an example, the word ‘idea’ was used 3 times in a short three sentence paragraph and a total of 13 times in one chapter. This is an easy fix however and just takes a bit of work to rectify. One last thing in this section, the author worked the end of the chapter into the beginning of the next chapter. So it was a constant repeat at the beginning of the chapter. It’s a bit off putting that they repeat the last scene, in the beginning of each new chapter. (See what I did here? Lol) It makes me want to skip paragraphs. For this I have to give this section 3 stars. Overall: it’s a great read. While there were some moments that could use editing and a bit of rework, the story itself and its character progression were beautiful. I’ve added it to my read list and will continue when I’ve found some more time. There were simple things that I truly enjoyed. As an example, the author used the characters of her book to explain why things were in English. I thought this was very smooth and a very smart way to explain the English transition while they’re in a different country. Overall, I’m happy with this novel and it gets 4.25 out of 5 stars.

2yr
Audu_Deborah
Audu_DeborahLv1

Such a sweet, beautiful romance story. The synopsis caught my attention and then decided to check the book out. I'm in for the rest chapters. The book progression is enthralling. Well done, author.

2yr
Related Stories

My Accidental Husband Is My Revenge Partner

Anastasia Harrison, a young woman abused by her cruel family, thought her life was over when they forced her to marry Richard, the sleazy black sheep of the wealthy Wallace family. Meanwhile, her favored younger sister, Michelle, was set to marry Xavier, the elder brother, who was a CEO. Yet, an error at city hall ended up swapping their names on their respective marriage certificates. "What is this?! How are you married to Xavier Wallace?" "You're not getting any food or water until you sign the divorce papers!" To add fuel to the fire, the old Mr. and Mrs. Harrison passed away, leaving all their assets to Anastasia and not the rest of the family. This drove the Harrisons to their breaking point. To trade for a peaceful life, Anastasia was willing to leave her inheritance and leave the family, but the Harrisons had other plans in mind. They wanted to get rid of her. Permanently. However, it was by a stroke of luck that Anastasia was found by her new husband, Xavier, before her family succeeded. Determined to get her revenge, she struck a deal with Xavier. "Continue to be my wife and I will help you get your revenge!"

Sour_corn · Urban
4.2
392 Chs

Husband With Benefits

Nora is shattered a month before her wedding when she uncovers her fiancé's deceitful affair. As she manages this betrayal, she discovers a deep ploy to hinder her from claiming her rightful inheritance. Devastated but determined, Nora takes a daring step to regain control of her life. Enter Demetri 'The Demon' to those who know him, a formidable man barely known to her, who offers her protection and support in return for a contract marriage to satisfy him. In a twist of fate, Nora marries Demetri to claim her inheritance and fight those who plotted against her. But as she battles her own family and Demetri's many rivals, will she be able to keep from falling for the man known to crush people beneath his booted heel. Excerpt: She had forgotten that the man was intimidating and directly challenged him. Rather than speaking, Demetri rose from his seat and approached her deliberately. Although it was a mere few steps, time seemed to stretch for Nora. When he was almost within touching distance, his hand gently landed on her knee, moving it sideways. His touch moved with a hint of a caress, and he stepped between her open legs. Nora sat there in frozen silence, her eyes wide like a deer caught in headlights. Catching her chin between his fingers, he tilted her face upwards and spoke unhurriedly," You are my wife." She nodded her head slowly in affirmation while his thumb slowly traced her lip. "I have given you time to gather your emotions." Another nod. Nora's nervousness made her lick her lips, acutely aware of his intense gaze fixed upon them. "Your reason for the marriage was to secure your inheritance and get away from under your mother's thumb." "Yes..." Nora whispered in confusion. Her confusion was not about his statement but about the bewildering sensations coursing through her. What was happening with her? "It's time for you to fulfil your end of the contract, yes?" He continued. "Yes," Nora whispered breathlessly. Why was she breathless? Had the oxygen level in the house dropped? Was the air suddenly thinning? Abruptly, his hand left her face, and she watched as he drew closer. It was then that Nora comprehended what was unfolding. All those tantalizing, heart-pounding kisses she had read about in novels were about to possibly become her reality. But the anticipated kiss didn't happen. Instead, he paused near her and commanded, "Kiss me."

har_k · Urban
4.8
899 Chs

Transmigrated Into The True Heiress

Eira Kingston, a feared assassin, never imagined that death would lead her to transmigrate into the body of Ephyra Allen, the disgraced first daughter of the once-powerful Allen family. But what shocked her even more was the soft mechanical voice in her mind, addressing her as "master" and informing her that her soul had returned to its original body. Eira dismissed the strange voice, thinking she was having a post-death hallucination. But waking up in a hospital, with memories that weren’t hers flooding back, she was forced to confront the truth. Ephyra’s life had been nothing short of a nightmare. Despite being the legitimate daughter, she was labeled a bastard, shunned by all, and overshadowed by her scheming stepsister, who had stolen the love of her father and her betrothed. To make matters worse, the wealth and status the Allen family enjoyed were all thanks to Ephyra’s late mother, and the only reason she hadn’t been discarded entirely was due to her mother’s inheritance, locked away until she turned eighteen. But Eira wasn’t one to be defeated by circumstances. If she was going to live Ephyra’s life, she would do so on her own terms. She would destroy those who had caused Ephyra pain, claim the inheritance that was rightfully hers, and find out who was behind her own death. Because if there was one thing Eira knew how to do well, it was to survive—and make her enemies pay. However, being a high-schooler with nothing to her name wasn’t enough. As Ephyra, she’s powerless, but as an assassin, she’s lethal. Still, even that wasn't enough until she became the contracted wife of Lyle Aelion—a powerful, enigmatic figure in the business world with a secret illness. And it turns out, the only thing that can relieve him is her scent.

Ella_Estrella23 · Urban
4.5
131 Chs

100 Days to Seduce the Devil

[Warning: R18+] When Hate turns into Love... and Vengeance turns into Passion... Will he choose to start over with her? ======= Phantomflake's soul got separated from her body after committing suicide in front of her enemy, Nathan Sparks, the Supreme Leader of Syphiruz Mafia. She woke up only to find out that her body (which was in a coma state) was being held captive by Nathan 'the Devil!', who was trying to prolong her life. And what was his motive? To kill her by his own hand and torture her to death! Nathan has a deep resentment against Phantomflake as she was the one who assassinated the most precious person in his life. He wanted revenge! And things just got more exciting when a magical creature appeared in front of Phantom's soul, giving her a ridiculous mission in exchange of regaining her body back. "Make him fall in love with you within 100 days!" The flying creature said, pointing his small paws at Nathan who expressionlessly stood next to her sickbed. With her eyes going round, Phantomflake made an 'you-got-to-be-kidding-me' face at the flying creature. No way! That's a mission impossible! This guy loathed her so much. How would she do that??! ****** Excerpt: Nathan grabbed her by her neck. "Don't play tricks with me, Phantomflake." Nathan's cold voice reverberated inside the room, his eyes burning with rage. But Phantomflake just smirked at him, pressing her hands against his chest, her fingers teasing him. "You can't kill me, Nate. Just admit it. You've already fallen for me." With one swift move, Phantomflake pulled his shirt, closing their gaps as she crushed her lips against his lips. Surprisingly, Nathan just found himself responding to her. He lost! He couldn't resist her. ===== I owned the Book Cover (=";"=) Artist: Bea Cortez Join Author's server to get updates and announcements about the book. Discord link: https://discord.gg/WymeFaeQe

ellezar_g · Urban
4.7
906 Chs

The Breeding Deal: Brother-in-law's Forbidden Offer

"Please... give me a baby." His eyes cut like sharp blades: "Even if it's with your husband's own brother?" I nod, trembling. To save my dying husband, I would cross any line. What started as a deal spun out of control in the darkness. "Look at me," he grips my chin. "What are you craving?" I shake my head, biting my lip as tears fall. "You want this..." his lips brush mine, "you want me." ———— The story will contain NSFW contents and slight BDSM. The ratio between NSFW vs. story development is around 4:6. The whole story shall be around 200 chapters. I will mark the explicit chapters with [E] before the title, so you will know (whether you want to skip or read, hehe.) Also, this will be my first book on Webnovel, thanks for your support! * I don't own the cover, I found it on pinterest.

Sky_Hunter23 · Urban
4.8
61 Chs

The Substitute Groom Chases His Wife

An Nuan thought that she was going to have her happy ending, marrying the love of her life when the man left her on their wedding day. "Pei Zhi Yi, the moment you step into the elevator, it's over between us." An Nuan thought that she could stop her fiance from leaving, but that man still left for the other woman. The wedding hall was prepared and the guests had all arrived. With no groom beside her, An Nuan decided that she would marry anyone willing. “An Nuan, if you are willing, then how about considering me as your groom?” Unexpectedly, the young master of the Lin family, Lin Xiao Feng stepped forward to offer himself. An Nuan did not expect much from this marriage, especially when they both agreed that they were seeking to gain something through this marriage. Lin Xiao Feng needed someone as his wife in his political career. Meanwhile, she just needed to marry someone to get over Pei Zhi Yi. As someone who was disappointed by love, An Nuan no longer wanted to believe in love. She never thought that the marriage that she did not expect would turn out better than she had expected. Young Master Lin would pamper her and support her whenever she needed help. Wasn’t their marriage just for show? --- Cover and characters Illustration commission by kirinlukis --- Shared universe with: 1. Loving You Too Much 2. True Love and Other Lies 3. A Lifetime with You 4. The Dragon Beside Me 5. Love So Sweet 6. Commander Qi's Runaway Wife 7. The Wedding Planner's Romance 8. The Author Must Die

zetsubouaichan · Urban
4.3
203 Chs

Mr. President: You Are The Daddy Of My Triplets

"M... Marissa! Are they my kids?" Rafael's eyes weren't moving away from the adorable kids' faces. "No, Rafael. They are not," Marissa said with a fake smile, "They aren't yours. Remember?" she batted her lashes quite dramatically, "We were never married!" Marissa Aaron’s elder sister Valerie Aaron jilted her blind boyfriend on her wedding day and ran off. For face-saving, Merissa's family pleaded to her to marry Raphael Sinclair. The irony? She was not allowed to tell her blind husband that she was not Valerie but Merissa Aaron. On the day of Raphael's successful eye surgery, Marissa got to know that Valerie was back to take her rightful place as Sinclaire’s daughter-in-law. Marissa tried explaining to her husband that she was the one married to him, but he did not believe her. Instead of any more convincing, heartbroken Merissa decided to leave the city without telling him, her secret. Raphael Sinclair was the classic definition of drop-dead gorgeous and was the only heir of the Sinclair group of industries. What would he do when he came to know that all this time the woman who offered him, her love and her body was not Valerie but her younger sister Marissa Aaron? How would he react when he came to know that he was the father of the babies Marissa was carrying in her womb? Would he go after Marissa and win her back? And the million-dollar question! Would Marissa ever be able to forgive him and love him again?

JessicaKaye911 · Urban
4.6
429 Chs
Login