Shameless author review. The more you read, the more you will like. If you like Madara, you will like this. If you don’t like Madara, you will still like this. Jokes aside, in the beginning, his personality may be slightly different than ’canon’ Madara, but he will regain his og personality once he learns more about the world.

Don't be fooled by the title and the synopsis. The MC is Madara himself(As stated by the author), but he doesn't act like the Madara we all know and love. The author changed Madara's personality making him kinder and more trusting of others.ES,

Naruto fan here. The fanfic is progressing in a very unique direction. The attention to details is great, and pacing is pretty good. I'm very curious what type of superhero world he actually landed in, and how the system will play into his powers.

this fanfic is very well developed and thought through it is clear that the writer is a well-thought-out man who knows his target audience and is able to successfully cater to them. This is undoubtedly the best fan fiction I have had the pleasure to read. I would highly recommend this to anyone due to the sheer quality the writer was able to produce through this novel especially since this being his first one, I look forward to seeing what the writer accomplishes in their time.

Want a character who thinks like madara? you will be disappointed. Besides, the two kids who get attached to him for no reason makes me think that you don't know how to write a story + it seems to be the beginning of a harem story, so that mother behaves like an incredible mother stereotype in manga. Nothing is original everything has already been done better elsewhere

hopefully author posts more chaps. i saw no grammar issues, story was unique, considering its actually madara, not another person in his body. i think the story has a lot of potentials. his thoughts are really well thought out, which i like. I'll wait a few months for there to be more chapters before reediting this review

Reveal spoiler

yes yes yes. I love Madara's reactions as he sees things for the first time in his life. thank god he's not a simp, either. gigachad mentality? i'll take it

I like this a lot and it will be fun to see madara go to school, and try to act like a normal kid. Which he probably won’t. I hope you don’t make him to arrogant though.

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