Review Detail of Pclerk in A New Era of Villain (DC/Marvel)
Review detail
I don’t know if this is a computer translation or not but there are definitely a few errors with syntax and grammar. It makes it very hard to follow along sometimes which of course detracts from other parts of the story. There are not ver many chapters so I can’t say to much about stability of updates but it’s ok so far. I don’t know if it’s the translation issue or just the story but the development seems fast and a little weird. It makes it so there is no way I can continue to read it in this state. The MC seems a little off in the head and full of himself right from the start, kind of similar to a certain genre of Chinese novels. Other characters need more time to be classified as good or bad but to direction does not seem to me good. Not enough so far for world background yet. There are some comments about this is a place or that place but the descriptions leave much to be desired. Concept has promise but the execution needs a lot of work.
A New Era of Villain (DC/Marvel)
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Question for the translator... does this go like an actual dc fic? As in the characters act like the original selves or do they act and speak like a Chinese story? (You know, "can't see Mount tai" "bowing your head" "typical young master type personalities" "slapping/saving face" and so on?) I don't see anything wrong with it as it's made for a different type of people and culture so it would be a good choice to alter it for the intended audience but I typically avoid western based fics when they are like that as I'm not the intended audience and am looking for ones that are made with western customs in mind (I.e., true to the original stories I know).
Rex_Zatch:Yes, the MC is an overpowered lunatic with a weird and illogical sense of mentality who will do anything to find fun. Because the novel is over 1000 chapter, the pace is slowed so not much off a world building is happening right now, but it will happen soon.image
Should_Be_Working:Question for the translator... does this go like an actual dc fic? As in the characters act like the original selves or do they act and speak like a Chinese story? (You know, "can't see Mount tai" "bowing your head" "typical young master type personalities" "slapping/saving face" and so on?) I don't see anything wrong with it as it's made for a different type of people and culture so it would be a good choice to alter it for the intended audience but I typically avoid western based fics when they are like that as I'm not the intended audience and am looking for ones that are made with western customs in mind (I.e., true to the original stories I know).
