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CephJesterLv22yr
2022-10-02 02:14

Review of a 4.0; The writing quality is 3/5, it seems to be an MTL or a standard translation without much editing. Some sentences seem strange in English and take away from the story, or there are some phrases that don't work. The stability of updates is 4/5. Story development is also a 4/5, to me, it seems well-paced. Not too fast or too slow. Character design is likewise a 4/5. The characters seem to somewhat match their originals, albeit a bit strange because of the translated/strange sentences. Some things they would never say or do, but I guess that's just a necessary difference for MTL/Translated stories. And the world background is a 5/5.

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