Review Detail of Heinzbeansscranner in Pokemon : The Force Of Chaos

i did a review before , and wow. I gotta say that i think that the author has improved since the beginning. My comment about grammar is becoming better and the author seems to be adressing issues. I feel like it is still vague atm but the author is leading to a climax. I feel like cults in pokemon is such a good idea , and i love pokemon insurgence so it's a win win for me lol.