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Heinzbeansscranner1yrPostedi did a review before , and wow. I gotta say that i think that the author has improved since the beginning. My comment about grammar is becoming better and the author seems to be adressing issues. I feel like it is still vague atm but the author is leading to a climax. I feel like cults in pokemon is such a good idea , and i love pokemon insurgence so it's a win win for me lol.
- Heinzbeansscranner1yrReplied to NiceReviewer
mb not 6 months ago a year ago. Time truly flies , doesn't it?
God, I had a person talk about "Bad execution" when we are not even 15 chapters in. the main plotline hasn't even been revealed yet, what do you mean bad execution? - Heinzbeansscranner1yrCommentedCh 39 Chapter 39 : Rise Of The Fall ; Part 2
- Heinzbeansscranner1yrReplied to Phantom_Zero_v2
bro, it was just a side note, why do you take everything so serious? just turn off your brain and enjoy the story
Also, Akashic Records of the bastard instructor are such a shit anime, don't even @ me.) - Heinzbeansscranner1yrReplied to Slksk_HshhsCh 9 Chapter 9 : The Grimoire Tower
- Heinzbeansscranner2yrReplied to Phantom_Zero_v2
Absorbing grimoires don’t give him the spells , nearly the magic and the memories of the magic.
However, Zakai theorized that this could mean that he could store up a large amount of temporary mana and turn it into real mana if he stored a large portion of it. - Heinzbeansscranner2yrReplied to king_Gurra10Ch 5 Chapter 5 : A Birthday Gift
- Heinzbeansscranner2yrReplied to Phantom_Zero_v2
mb, will change
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"Put that bottle down, you harlot." Selek hissed, causing Selena to take another swig in defiance. - Heinzbeansscranner2yrReplied to JmJgJhCh 24 Confronting The Coward
- Heinzbeansscranner2yrReplied to SchisonoCh 23 The Straw Doll
- Heinzbeansscranner2yrReplied to LiLRascal
i hope you realize your sins and cry yourself to sleep thinking about this
Though Berengar held limited authority within his father's land, he figured at the very least he could negotiate with his father about the implementation of such technology. If his father asked where he found such blueprints, he could simply say he acquired it from a trader from the far east. After all, similar technologies should exist in China during this time period. The earlier the Barony could mass-produce steel, the better it was for his plans. - Heinzbeansscranner2yrCommented
HE MUST STANK SO BAD
After donning the attire, he shifted his attention to his short golden hair. Though he was no hairdresser, at the very least, he could use some of the greasy residue left on the tub to slick his hair back. He would seriously need to invent pomade to get his hair the way he liked it. After styling his hair, he left the bathroom and saw that a servant was waiting for him. - Heinzbeansscranner2yrReplied to JmJgJhCh 21 The Troll In The Dungeon
- Heinzbeansscranner2yrCommentedI clenched my new muscle this and that, until suddenly a spurt of thick, bitter-tasting liquid filled my mouth. I spit it out in a hurry, but as soon as it left my mouth, it began to solidify. Without a tongue I couldn't even push it out, and had to use my tiny claws to pull it out of my mouth before it would glue it shut.
- Heinzbeansscranner2yrReplied to Soma_sama
well, nothing in hp is realistic besides not like you know the personality of wizards
"YOU DID THIS TO HER!, YOU!" the man aggressively placed the baby down, before looking at the first brother, baby Rolf. - Heinzbeansscranner2yrReplied to DaoOfCopying
my fuck up
"Luna Lovegood!" Professor McGonagall rang out - Heinzbeansscranner2yrReplied to Anime_Admirer
That contradicts the night scene when there own the boats and it’s nightime
it was normally a 2 and half-hour-long journey, from London to the Scottish higlands. of course, the train was magically enchanted, so it went faster than a usual train.