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Hobo_Hank
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2022-09-05 10:10

To start off, the writing quality is top notch, and the grammar is great. I’m never left disappointed by a chapter, and I’m always waiting for the latest release! The MC feels like he belongs, and isn’t just thrown into the story as an extra. I’d highly recommend if you’re a fan of the light novel. All In all, just read it

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Krypton71
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Thank you for the review! 🙏 I’ve never considered the idea of belonging but it’s an interesting way of looking at it.

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