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UnknownUser420
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2022-08-27 12:39

Great fanfic, we are just in the beginning of the story but so far the fanfic looks great. Whether the writing or the character, it looks really great. From my point of view, the MC in his previous life, studied in all boys school, so I'm looking forward for him how he's gonna interact with other characters. His great advantage is his knowledge of the future, so I were him, I should not change the plot line at all cost and stay behind the scene while also enjoying a little bit like improving his social skills but also his mental and physical abilities. Overall, highly recommended for those who want to know what is like being a normal dude in the COTE universe

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Krypton71
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Thank you for the review!! 😍 This is my first supporter so take his review with a pinch of salt ;) He’s for sure biased 😆 About your chapter comment in Chapter 8, it was removed by WN for using * ss. I won’t answer it anyway since it’ll be explored within the next two chapters. Again, thank you for supporting since day 1! 🙏

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AshbornKRAVKE
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Disclaimer: I am not a good reviewer but I will try my best to write a review to make you interested in this fanfiction. As for now, there are only 6 chapters and all of the chapters are above average. The author focuses on his own mc's story so as far as you can probably tell, you will find an original and exciting story that doesn't revolve around mc just sticking to Ayanokouji. And I love the mc's circle, yes, while it's mostly filled with girls for now but I know that from the beginning, mc wasn't simp to every woman, he admires beauty but that's it, he doesn't go after every woman. I am pretty tired of the same circle every fanfiction author makes (I am assuming they don't want to make it look like is not a simp but around with a perv and lazy bums don't make it any better) I can't clearly see the main goal of the mc but either I forget or it wasn't really explained. I hope to see the main goal more clearly in future chapters. The English are pretty great, I couldn't say that it was perfect but I assure you it's understandable and has little to none mistakes. The writing style is pretty comfortable enough so I'll give it a plus. Now, I am not sure about the updates but I do hope that the author has some decent schedule since good COTE fanfic is pretty rare to find. But I won't force the author to write, take a rest to fill your head with exciting ideas for us to show, I am pretty lucky to find this lucky myself as I thought that fanfic is slowly dying (swarmed by harem and nonsense story and a lot of good fanfic left behind) Thank you for your attention and happy reading, friends.

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