Okay, I'm gonna just be upfront about this: You need to get ahold of a beta, someone who will read through the chapter and make it flow better. There's way too many parts that either are just outright mistakes, or do things that you really needed to stop and think "Does this make sense in-universe?" The first major thing was Hanns shooting first at the Atlesians. He had absolutely no way to know what they were there for, aside from that it was likely for him. Whether they were there to investigate, to capture him, to kill him or simply to confirm that he did in fact exist, he couldn't possibly know, and yet he held no hesitation in shooting at them and killing a large amount of people without remorse or even a moment of real thought. The characters do that a lot, they very quickly reach the correct answer and nothing even remotely dissuades them from that answer. You need to put yourself in their position and give some serious thought as to whether that conclusion is the conclusion that they should have reached at that moment. As for the story itself, it's an oddball but I like that, the idea of a living tank with a game system, that's a fun story idea that I haven't read in a story before. A bit silly sometimes and picturing exactly what Hanns is doing can be hard since you seem to prefer more vague terms and broad strokes for the combat, but that's fine.

Jsut for the fact that its a war thunder system/fic i will give you a complete 5 star rating becouse i love/hate the game as well so keep up the good work and May we see more

5 stars didn't even start to read yet but the name Hans and the idea alone deserve a 5 star. Don't drop and do what you want with the book author it definitely is something many will read

Very interesting idea. Can’t wait to see how the story develops. Quick info: MC gets transported to RWBY (1st world), as a tank and has to upgrade himself through points earned after combat (literally like War Thunder).

bro you had me at warthunder and fanfiction. never knew som1 had ballz to make!

an excellent experience when reading, the characters sometimes meta and reach an answer you wouldn't normally reach, but that's okay, include vague and broad combat description and its pretty good, p.s. he's a tank. its awsome.

if your looking for a good tank fan fic you have come to the right place, too bad its just war thunder system if it was just a tank system think of a baneblade from warhammer 40k lol that be epic

I remember searching for some sort of War Thunder fanfiction years ago. I'm glad that the first one I actually got to read was well written.

really unique and entertaining to read I want to see how far you go and the different experiences that you can go through with different characters.

This is a great story which I am sad to see laid to rest.