if i hoestly have to say anything, its the fact that the test to get into the military was waaaaaaaaaay to drawn out. i like the details, but i feel there are certain things that are focused on to much (ie, some of the notifications from the system are to unnecessarily focused on), especially with the word count per chapter. the chapters are quite short, and a lot of them go into explaining small details, rather than focusing on the main story. i know a lot of people enjoy slow paced novels, and there was a lot of information being divulged, but the entrance test for the military was from chapter 77 to 219 of (from what ive picked up) was only 15ish days long in the story. im not saying thats bad, certain people enjoy the focus on all the minute details, but frankly, it feels like there was a lot of filler, and repeated information. idrc about the characters traits, as those are bound to change with time, and i like to see the end result, but i feel like it would take to much time with that kind of pace. Im not meaning to dog or anything, im just saying theres a lot of filler and repeat information. and unless the pace of the story picks up, theres bound to be a lot of dissatisfaction arrising over time. i havent read past 219, and as i said, there was a lot of information to process, but the fact that its over 200 chapters, and we havent made it off the base planet, is a buzzkill for me so imma just drop it. i hope you still keep going with it, and wish you luck, but as much patience as id like to believe i have, thats way to slow paced for me.
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Bro, I totally appreciate the brutal honesty and it shows me that you were genuinely involved in this novel. I myself get too flustered by all the details I have added and it is an honest-to-God nightmare, trying to find a detail that I might have mentioned somewhere 40 chapters ago. I have learned to get to the point quicker and to leave some of the more boring bits out as you would have noticed that the arc after the military test is only 60 chapters long and it has arguably the same amount of action and lore as the Military test saga. I am still not great at it, but I have been constantly evolving and learning with time. This is my first work and I have learned that when a person has to satisfy an audience, he sometimes has to suppress his own desires a bit as I myself get too carried away adding details as I absolutely adore them. I appreciate you sticking with my novel for 219 chapters and who knows, maybe you'll pick it back up in the future, but truly do appreciate you and everyone else for reading my silly story and for supporting me. Thank you so much ❤❤❤
no problem. ill pick it up eventually, i d just like to wait till theres more chapters honestly. id rather wait till then so that i can skip chapters that i think have a lot of filler. honestly though, not a bad novel. should for sure keep it up. i really do like sci-fi a lot so its always nice seeing someone else who is just as interested if not more
