I love the story lines and the character, the character I really love is Zack. The only thing that was off was just the absence of the use of capital letters at the sentence beginning. Apart from that, it was a great story. Please keep updating

shameless author here 🤭 this is actually my first book ever and may have a lot of grammatical mistakes which have tried correcting, I'll ask to give it a try if you want but if you don't 👇

Good. An evocative story, with straightforward language. very much deserves to stay on the reading list. Excited for the author... Hopefully the hard work won't be in vain

The story's been brilliant so far, good world building and nice pacing to it. It's also structurally okay. I'm hoping the author is able to keep up the good work and even improve further. Good work author!

Wow that's a well developed story. Even I write do check it out

It starts off with an interesting pemise and builds up to the mystery surrounding lucy and her mother. The story even has magical elements that I didn't expect to see at all, so this should be pretty interesting........try using more dialoue and consistently sticking to one perspective to enhance your flow.

The story is good, word building is good, grammar and spelling, everything is good

Really good book,am eagerly waiting for the next chapters.