Rosewater15
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There are a lot! of exclamation marks! So exciting! Anyways other than that it's a story about I think a girl who will get married off at 25, since that's the tradition. Apparently giving birth to girls is bad lol cos you gotta marry them off (in the book) Well I hope I see how she leads to the doom of the kingdom
they will bump into each other shoujo style
cute. love at first sight for both of them?
shes so beautiful author needs to use the word two times
is she dead??
I feel like the main downside to this story is the writing quality. Some words seem off because the characters are screaming/shouting them but they are lowercase, and it kinda makes the scene confusing, but other than that, this book is really good! I like the premise and other than grammar it seems pretty well written. I'm not sure if it's finished cos the last chapter was updated a year ago but good job!
The story is really good! I've only read a few chapters and felt like he kinda just brushed past his mom dying, but I guess he moves on fast. So far he seems to have not too much trauma from that, haha... the writing style is also unique, and I feel like short sentences makes me more interested than long paragraphs~ keep going!