Item: Justinian of Austria
Rating: 1
Author: InHisName

InHisNameLv62yr

2022-09-03 00:34

I thought this novel could be it. That this novel would follow in the footsteps of the likes of 'My German Empire' by NeonLights. The start was promising, with the protagonist being aware of the many threats, dangers and opportunities that awaits his future domain - actively building his power base (economically, politically, and militarily). Then chapter 4 happened. The Crown Prince of Austria coincidentally meets a Japanese-commoner girl, instantly has good feelings for her - with the author setting the stage for their future love. There's even MC's monologue about his East-Asian fetish. Meiji era Japan wasn't as restrictive as they were during the Tokugawa period, but there's no way on Earth that 1) A women would be sent overseas for study. 2) That the women going off to study would be off peasant-origin. 3) That she would somehow attend the one of the most prestigious educational establishment in the entire world. All of these forced plot developments is too much. This is also incredibly poor sign of things to come in the future...

Justinian of Austria

WewWar25

4.3

131 Chs

Liked by 29 people

Replies11

WewWar25Author

Actually I based her from the stories of women who are able to study abroad during the Early Meiji era period like Tsuda Umeko and Yamakawa Sutematsu but instead in the United States but to Germany. And also a lot of successful Japanese businessmen during that period are from good and powerful clans but I didn't stated it early in the novel for the plot. By the way thank you for reading and the reviews. I hope you would still continue reading :)

2yr

SwiftescapeLv15

Sigh..... My German Empire was too good. It's unfortunate this novel can't even try to follow in its footsteps.

2yr

InHisNameLv6

Indeed. Authors of the historical genre tend to project their own 21st century (usually Western) values and norms unto everything. Which becomes incredibly frustrating.

Swiftescape:Sigh..... My German Empire was too good. It's unfortunate this novel can't even try to follow in its footsteps.

2yr

_BruhLv13

can you please give me recommendations? the only good historical fic I've liked so far is Napoleon in 1812 but that wasn't a transmigrator mc fic

2yr

Iyoten_kita_janLv2

Guys I found the My German empire thingy

1yr

Iyoten_kita_janLv2

Swiftescape:Sigh..... My German Empire was too good. It's unfortunate this novel can't even try to follow in its footsteps.

1yr

SwiftescapeLv15

That is an inferior machine translation of this novel.

Iyoten_kita_jan:
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1yr

Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

Woman Chinese *

1yr

whyudothat_Lv4

I'm curious tho is there really a need to compare?

1yr

Dr2220Lv12

Wdym was the original one deleted?

Swiftescape:That is an inferior machine translation of this novel.

1yr

ShinoFranzLv3

as one of the legend reader, I tried reading " My German Empire on mtl, unfortunately the translation become so worst that I was even confused the "he,she,they,her,him" and more da pak, i had to stopped o baka masisira ung buhay ko.. sklanyway, for those who are interested in historical type of novel, highly recommended "Kingdom of the Pearl of the Orient" it was the best alternate history tht I've read, u can also check "Sadaam nation" or Tyranny of Steel

1yr

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Senecio_takoLv2

I see flames on the cover. I see Austria in the title. It reminds me of a certain person with a funny-looking moustache. Anyways, the story is very promising. It really makes me want to read more.

2yr

WewWar25Author

For us authors, our own creations would always be the best and it is more biased. This is my very first novel and I will put everything to make this novel enjoyable. If you have any suggestions and comment, you can freely comment and review my novel and I will take consideration of your opinions. I hope you will continue to support my novel. Thank you and God Bless!

2yr

VLADSYARIFLv11

nice alternative history webnovel. i like your story, especially post napoleonic war. your world building background was unique and your story development is great.

2yr

MmMAaaSsSTeerrLv5

I thought I found an interesting story but it feels like its force especially when the introduction of the transmigrator and the way u handle the french princess and those Demands and there's no details about this transmigrator like what year they live before they die like that ? and the way u order ur man to secretly buy weapon and train ur troops how can u say it's a secret when so many people know ur moves ? anyway nice try but I think gonna stop reading this ps don't mind my english

2yr

George_VasiliuLv3

MC meets commoner girl and falls in love... as the crown prince of a nation on the precipice... even refuses daughter of the french emperor ... Whatever i was expecting...it was not a DISNEY CARTOON Apreciate the effort but plot is too diluted...too many pov's and all the plot feels contrived

1yr

LuciMorningstar365Lv1

This novel has the makings of a classic. It fuses concepts of historical webnovels with some of those classically enjoyed by the readers here (reincarnation/transmigration, kingdom building). I have always found 19th century Europe to be one of the most fascinating and influential periods in history. Seeing how things could be from the Austrian perspective excites me as a reader. If you do too, then you'll love Justinian. BTW, as a person who enjoys solid grammar and formatting, this is a treat.

2yr

Aaron000007Lv1

I really enjoy the novel. Even if it simple and a newbie. You can sense the amount of effort and research the novel has. The story is still in its early stage and I really enjoy alternate history novels.

2yr

BloodyWaterLv1

A pretty good fic until now, unless you know the games used for the plot you would be rather confused on if it is history lesson or not at the start. Everything is detailed and I would love to see the plot author has planned so far

2yr

The_King09Lv2

The novel is very nice and wonderful. It is an alternate history and the story is well written. Hope for more updates. Keep up the good work.

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