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2023-09-05 18:48

All these authors who start a short story without ever finishing it and thus only waste time unnecessarily for those looking for something to read have really tired me out

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This is an absolutely amazing story. While the title sounds like the generic types of this genre, the difference is wide as an abyss. The writing quality pulls a huge one over all the others. The author describes the environment so vividly and non-monotonously. The translator did a very good job conveying that feeling to the readers as well. That was only the scenes too. The personality of the main character is amazing, not too exaggerated for a person being transmigrated into a wholly new environment, just a bit better than a chunk of the population. The environment that the story based itself upon is much better than other types as well, since it puts a much more active objective of survival, being unable to stay in one spot, than passive, just waiting for catastrophes to occur. It forces people to survive instantly at the beginning, rather than allow people to muddle around until they have zero prospects. Regarding secrets, this story gives rewards when any secret is disclosed, which is a very nice mechanism, giving a reason for many people, even the most inept for the environment to have at least a chance for survival. In additionally, many of the general knowledge and instructions were given in the beginning, allowing people to have at least a sense of what is happening and what to do, with the consequences of not doing so as well. I may be too excited right now (for the fishies!) to notice some of the small flaws, but there really isn't much. Especially when compared to the other generic stories of this genre.

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