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2022-08-20 04:38

This is a good start to a promising book it is well written with a good concept hopefully it can develop into a great novel in the future Sometimes some of the phrasing can be a bit awkward but not detrimentally so

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Thank you for your feedback, I really appreciate it! I will definitely keep the phrasing in mind as time goes on.

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