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2022-08-28 18:50

As I write this review I am in chapter 17. The story is interesting, the author takes the time to develop his character, which I particularly appreciate. In 17 chapters we are still not at episode 3, the MC is not glued to the chronology and Scott. The author takes the time to present the MC, her background, background, skills, and direct interactions with the main female character. We are entitled to changes of point of view, which is also appreciable and makes it possible to discover the worlds and the MC by other characters. The author is not afraid to take risks and get out of the main plot which I really appreciate. As for grammar, not being an English speaker myself, I usually don't dwell on it as long as it's readable and understandable. Updates are stable. In short, it's a good story with no major negative points and which is very appreciable, I recommend.

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