its good and all but I have one problem I have been reading a older pokemon FF again and I noticed that there are alot of similarities between the two such as the pokemon at the start both a bulbasaur and shiny magicarp the only difference is he doesn't have a chimchar.Two the exact same scenario happens with officer Jenny again it could be a coincidence alot of things are different it's just I felt that these specific thing were to close it cloud be it was made that way because it was a pretty simple interaction and both pokemon are popular I just don't like people stealing other peoples things
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You're right. Actually, it was this FF that got me to write a FF of my own. However, you forgot how the God helped him in the beginning, how he got some OP origin energy and whatnot. Also, my MC isn't an old man who died but a teenager transmigrator. Not to mention, the system; his system has quests and gives him money yet mine is more like a status borad with a additional ability to let him decide what kind move his Pokemon should learn when they level up or evolve. As for the story itself, like I said, it as indeed inspired by journey towards greatness. Therefore, in the early chapters I kinda imitated it. Still, it was only at the easily chapters. Afterwards, I found my one pocket and it began writing my own plot. I hope, I clarified myself.
