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just doing my part

I thought it would be fun to read until I saw who was the author

it's fine the only things I think need improvement were the fights and passing

I'm doing one of those myself but it doesn't explicitly say it is

Haven't read this what so ever but I'm a bit sceptical about it since there already is a fan fic with emiya and bell mixed as the main character not to mention the description seems somewhat similar not saying it is a copy it's just insanely similar to another one

the synopsis has the word fascist so I'm going to assume the writer is some LGBTQ bitch

I'll try and do that but my brain gets pretty dumb when in in the zone

well his livelihood in his past was slave training for the rich and corrupt so he definitely has those darker side but I don't want him to just start killing children for no reason or even worse fucking them he has boundaries there just not that big of ones