Review Detail of bitterlouise in Eterna: The Cursed Executioner

Item: Eterna: The Cursed Executioner
Rating: 4.4

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bitterlouiseLv51yrbitterlouise

The progress of the story is quite stable but there are inconsistencies and there are sentences that are confusing. Also, I hope the grammar can be improved in time. Still, Author did good!😊🧡

Eterna: The Cursed Executioner

zawkey

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bitterlouiseLv5bitterlouise

You are welcome😊

1yr

zawkeyAuthorzawkey

Thank you for the input. Didn't know you read it since i still fixing stuff in there. So yeah, the story kinda messed up right now. But it will fix soon

1yr