webnovel
kosmas_kosmas
kosmas_kosmasLv42yr
2022-11-09 05:56

......................................

(Game of Thrones) The Pale Khal

Telling_Tall_Tales
4.4
20 Chs

Liked by 1 people

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
Telling_Tall_Tales
Telling_Tall_TalesAuthor

5 stars by far the beat fic I’ve ever read keep up the great work

2yr

CopyPaste1
CopyPaste1Lv13

the story is not really bad but there are many problems the grammar and especially yhe dialogues need work then we have many plot holes.. how jon had ghost when he was only 8? how a kid 8 y old with only months of training can kill 3 grow men who fight at pits? unrealistic why jon snow didn't ask of the guy from dorne to send a message to his father so ned knows where jon and maybe save him?? kal said jon snow is a westerosi name..and he named him jonos snow..wow amazing deference all this and more small plotholes make the story not bad but not really good either!

2yr
_Medeiros
_MedeirosLv2

the story has many holes like an 8 year old being able to defeat 3 adult fighters and honestly jon's idea turns into an avatar and just laughs but that's just my opinion I wish you good luck with the story

2yr
Cruz_Scifers1988
Cruz_Scifers1988Lv14

i give you 5 stars keep up the great work and I hope you will keep writing I love the story can't wait for more I really want you to give him dragons maybe one or two don't want to try to tell you how to write but would like to see dragons[img=update][img=update]

2yr
Mastersun
MastersunLv1

This story is very simple to read and perceive, and in itself quite uncomplicated, but very interesting and even catchy. ...............,....................................................

2yr
Monarch_freereader
Monarch_freereaderLv14

this fanfic of yours is a wonderful GOT Fanfic to be read . it has potential to evolve more while the story goes. background and other aspect of this novel is wonderful coming from my perspective 5 ⭐ hoping to read more from this FF praying for your good health 🙏 👍☺️👌

2yr
Vipex_Puka
Vipex_PukaLv4

Even if the Start is a bit rushed, and the Updates paused for 2 Months, I still enjoy this Fan-fic. Keep up the great work. I hope for more Chapters

2yr
Lucifer_light
Lucifer_lightLv15

Good story....A nice character development .. although chapters are small they are good 👍😊.... Hope not to Stop the work..... ... A different fanfiction compared others ...were story doesn't takes place in westors ...... there is a system tag line....so far in the story there is no system

2yr
Kaios
KaiosLv4

Loved It . Need More . Good Work Author-San .. [img=update]

2yr
Related Stories

Modern Family: New Life

Ethan, a young quarterback with great potential and a hidden passion for pop culture, tragically dies during an important high school game. However, his soul transmigrates into the body of Andrew, a small child adopted by Cameron and Mitchell from the show Modern Family. In this new life, in addition to pursuing his dream as a quarterback, Andrew begins sharing his passion for video games, comics, and movies online, becoming an unexpected internet celebrity. Follow Andrew’s journey as he interacts with the show’s characters while fulfilling his two greatest dreams. Author's Note: This is not just the world of Modern Family; I’m planning to involve other series as well, although I’ll decide on that as I go. Another important point is that this could be considered an AU since I will change some Modern Family dates and events, such as Mitchell and Cameron adopting a boy before Lily. The story won’t focus 100% on the MC’s journey toward sports success or internet fame. While these aspects will be present, they won’t be the emphasis in every chapter. I also want to focus on comedy and slice of life elements. I will upload about 4 to 5 chapters per week. You can find advanced chapters on my patreon. https://www.p@treon.com/Nathe07

Nathe07 · TV
4.9
78 Chs

House of The Dragon-The Beauty, The Bold, And The Black Dread

The Gods Are Cruel. The common saying in Westeros, which everyone says when an ironic and painful thing happens. While they are Cruel, they can be somewhat strange in their actions. They were strange for never letting Balerion, The Black Dread, to fully die. The old but extremely stubborn Dragon would spend decades merely on the verge of crossing to the other side, yet never doing so. He wouldn't let anyone claim him, neither, using his weak strength to snap at anyone who dared which prompted any keeper to let him be. Until one day, that is. Baelon Targaryen, son of Viserys I Targaryen and Aemma Arryn, was able to survive the wretched decision his Father made on that fateful day. Unfortunately for him; His Mother could not. This eventually led Viserys to remarry and have more children, as Fate would have it. And as Fate would also have it, Balerion would regain his Vigor on the fateful day of Baelon's birth. Almost as if the gods planned this, it would seem, Baelon and Balerion eventually crossed paths and the two of them bonded. (Slow Updates) (Cover is AI Art I did online.)

Lunacia_Yujin · TV
4.8
121 Chs

Game Of Thrones: A Knight's tale.18+

The protagonist fell asleep while playing an online game( For honor). However, he awoke in a strange world(Asoiaf) with his game character’s appearance. In a state of shock, he noticed that he was equipped with nothing but his strongest weapon and armor. To make matters worse, our hero’s appearance was changed by the special avatar skin 『Warden』 when he enter this new world. The protagonist wanted to live without drawing attention. But ultimately everything goes out of his control. (AN)I don't own anything. English is not my native language and I'm writing this from my phone. thus lots and lots of grammatical mistakes are included in the story. If you don't like it then just leave ,you don't need to write your comment . I'm warning the story is horrible . Warning a lot of sex scene...be aware...

Kagetanehiruko · TV
4.4
126 Chs

Game of Thrones: The Frozen Throne

Reborn as Eddard Stark, Duke of Winterfell, with knowledge of the past and future, one man seeks to reshape the North into an unbreakable kingdom. No longer bound by blind honor, he will forge a path of strength, strategy, and dominance. The South sees the North as a frozen wasteland, a mere shield for their wars—but that will change. The wolves will rise, the North will prosper, and no king shall command Winterfell. With cunning diplomacy, ruthless warfare, and an iron will, Eddard Stark will defy fate, crush his enemies, and carve a new legend into the annals of Westeros! Winter is no longer coming—it has arrived! Read now and witness the rebirth of the true ruler of the North! Support me on Patreon: http://patreon.com/Wintersbard Twenty previous chapters on Patreon. This is the translation of the original name:权游：北境之王

Wintersbard · TV
3.2
67 Chs

The Vampire Diaries: Bastard Line of Delgallo

Leon Delgallo is more than just a name—he is the bastard heir to a forgotten bloodline and the vessel of a transmigrated soul, carrying knowledge beyond his years. —an echo of something far older, a whisper of a forgotten bloodline carrying the weight of a soul that does not belong to this time. At eighteen, he performs an unspeakable ritual in The Garden, a graveyard of the undead, Marcel Gerard’s vampire prison, sacrificing the lives of countless vampires to fuel his power and awaken a power buried deep within him. Now hunted, he vanishes into the night, drawn by forces unseen toward a fate only he can grasp. His journey takes him to Duke University, where he steals an ancient bone-short sword last used by the Choctaw of Lousiana, a relic tied to the same dark origins as his grandfather’s blade. With both weapons in his possession, he arrives in Mystic Falls on March 26, 2010, stepping into a supernatural battleground where vampires, witches, and ancient forces collide. Romance, Weaktostong, reincarnation

DaoistLiuShengren · TV
Not enough ratings
29 Chs
Login