Review Detail of Sunlit_Sage in A Light Within Darkness

Item: A Light Within Darkness
Rating: 3.6

Review detail

Sunlit_SageLv141yrSunlit_Sage

cultivation is literally the worst thing you could have chosen as a cheat. not because it isn't strong but because it feals cheap. the only thing people ever change about cultivation in novels is the names of realms and cultivation methods, the energy being cultivated and what makes the mc's cultivation different from other cultivators. and so far yours isnt much different. now im not saying that its bad because i dont like cultivation, that would stupid of me. all im saying is you should maybe try and stand out a bit in that aspect, for example you kinda fallowed the Chinese naming thing where they give stuff long and cringy name, (or aleast i thought it was cringy lol) and honestly i just dont thing cultivation fits very well in 40k, but i really do think you can make it work so ill keep reading and hope this turns out to be just as good as your other works.

A Light Within Darkness

Azazyel

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Replies15

iwantyouinmyswampLv4iwantyouinmyswamp

God_Of_Wolves:So? It’s fun to read about and it works great in any setting.

6mth

Venerable_FarLv2Venerable_Far

cultivation is the most amazing and probably most overpowered cheat, the issue is the slave thing

1yr

AuksinLv13Auksin

It’s the most boring way to get strong . And the most boring power system to write about

Venerable_Far:cultivation is the most amazing and probably most overpowered cheat, the issue is the slave thing

11mth

God_Of_WolvesLv14God_Of_Wolves

So? It’s fun to read about and it works great in any setting.

Auksin:It’s the most boring way to get strong . And the most boring power system to write about

11mth

AuksinLv13Auksin

Please sigin me up for when the mc defeats the Equivalent of a stage 2 star powered elder when he’s barely low earth power. Plus with his ancestor grade weapon. Oh and the Jade beauty he stole from the elders grandson.

God_Of_Wolves:So? It’s fun to read about and it works great in any setting.

11mth

Linus279Lv4Linus279

Nah it's not. Even without omnipotence I know 5 powers who are just better

Venerable_Far:cultivation is the most amazing and probably most overpowered cheat, the issue is the slave thing

10mth

lordhokageLv4lordhokage

well dont put us in suspence what are they

Linus279:Nah it's not. Even without omnipotence I know 5 powers who are just better

8mth

Linus279Lv4Linus279

Meta Ability Creation, Reality Warping, Absolute Transcendence, Causality Manipulation, Concept Inbodiment and Perfect Copy.

lordhokage:well dont put us in suspence what are they

8mth

lordhokageLv4lordhokage

whats absolute transcendence

Linus279:Meta Ability Creation, Reality Warping, Absolute Transcendence, Causality Manipulation, Concept Inbodiment and Perfect Copy.

8mth

PaulcaitLv4Paulcait

All of those are things you don't have to work on

Linus279:Meta Ability Creation, Reality Warping, Absolute Transcendence, Causality Manipulation, Concept Inbodiment and Perfect Copy.

2mth

PaulcaitLv4Paulcait

I enjoy cultivation because it's something that can grow through the effort of the character. By this i don't mean a bad chinese novel where every chapter they have a different boost.

2mth

PaulcaitLv4Paulcait

If there was something i personally hated in fanfics it would be gacha systems.

Paulcait:I enjoy cultivation because it's something that can grow through the effort of the character. By this i don't mean a bad chinese novel where every chapter they have a different boost.

2mth

PaulcaitLv4Paulcait

I am fairly sure you can achieve all of that if you become a powerful enough cultivator.

Linus279:Nah it's not. Even without omnipotence I know 5 powers who are just better

2mth

Linus279Lv4Linus279

And?

Paulcait:All of those are things you don't have to work on

2mth

PaulcaitLv4Paulcait

It's just personal taste, i like stories where the main character has to work for their power. so it feels like they deserve it. weakToStrong basically. a really good example would be xia by couer dal aran (i don't know if I spelled it correctly.). it is a wuxia rwby fanfiction and it has this really interesting dynamic of master and disciple that i like. It's not cultivation but the story is still great.

Linus279:And?

2mth