Item: Night Monarch Returns
Rating: 3
Author: Zerus

ZerusLv152yr

2022-08-13 20:50

Would actually be a good story, unfortunately the Mc is passive and submissive, the story would be much better if he were more dominant, unfortunately, it looks like it would get worse and the Mc even more passive

Night Monarch Returns

Dark_Bangali

4.5

52 Chs

Liked by 6 people

Replies10

Dark_BangaliAuthor

just give him some time and let him mature. You can't expect a child to act mature right?

2yr

ZerusLv15

yes, you can't expect that from a child, but mc is 20 years old at the time of his rebirth, which makes it just annoying that he acts like a child

Dark_Bangali:just give him some time and let him mature. You can't expect a child to act mature right?

2yr

ZerusLv15

it would be ok if mc hadn't been 20 before he was born again but he was then so he's not a kid.

Dark_Bangali:just give him some time and let him mature. You can't expect a child to act mature right?

2yr

Umm_KLv2

He is a reincarnated 20 year old whatyumean

Dark_Bangali:just give him some time and let him mature. You can't expect a child to act mature right?

2yr

Carbon_6597Lv14

he's 20 yr old before reincarnation and a incubus. wdym wait for him to mature

Dark_Bangali:just give him some time and let him mature. You can't expect a child to act mature right?

2yr

someone_crazyLv3

Lol if this was his first life it would be fine but come on he was old enough in his previous life and the problem is that he can't even voice out his own opinion all he does is be a yes Man The concept is good though but MC is a bit disappointing

Dark_Bangali:just give him some time and let him mature. You can't expect a child to act mature right?

2yr

Dark_Crow_DaoLv14

Does his personality change during the 50 chapters or not please ? I don't want to waste too much time waiting for the MC to mature a bit since i liked the concept of the novel and i would like to try it.

2yr

ZerusLv15

I only endured the mc up to chapter 18 and it hasn't gotten any better since then

Dark_Crow_Dao:Does his personality change during the 50 chapters or not please ? I don't want to waste too much time waiting for the MC to mature a bit since i liked the concept of the novel and i would like to try it.

2yr

Dark_Crow_DaoLv14

Thanks for your feedback.

Zerus:I only endured the mc up to chapter 18 and it hasn't gotten any better since then

2yr

_GoldenStick_Lv3

Incubus King? lol the incubus baby should be more suitable

Dark_Bangali:just give him some time and let him mature. You can't expect a child to act mature right?

2yr

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