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accidentaljihad
accidentaljihadLv152yr
2023-04-05 04:24

decent story, not too many things overtly bad about it but the biggest annoyance is that for every character he/she is mixed up and changes multiple times in the chapter, every single chapter. at least theres a 50% chance of it being right, but if you're not familiar with the character you'll never know

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grav1ty24
grav1ty24Lv2

Im using google translator all the time, and all novels/ff have the same problem, it is a bit confusing but im getting used to

AzureFluteFan2
AzureFluteFan2Lv5

Oh lord traps must be super confusing for you lol

grav1ty24:Im using google translator all the time, and all novels/ff have the same problem, it is a bit confusing but im getting used to
grav1ty24
grav1ty24Lv2

actually i never saw any of them

AzureFluteFan2:Oh lord traps must be super confusing for you lol
Anhe_2o44
Anhe_2o44Lv14

didnt see much of that. maybe 1 or 2 times. but i think the writing is really good

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