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xEnvy
xEnvyLv111yr
2023-05-21 04:37

The story is bland, theres no plot, his just narrating the story. no adventure he is op but greedy. its not bad, but its not that good either.

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Matsuba_Kuroe
4.4
290 Chs

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Jade_beauty
Jade_beautyLv4

The story is good, and there is no harem. The main character is a cool guy and the author of the story is even cooler because he doesn't like harem.

2yr

Ppq_Dewa
Ppq_DewaLv4

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2yr
Ashborn1609
Ashborn1609Lv4

sorry if I'm late to write a review. I've read till ch60 and I can assure you this is gold. First mc is strong(op) from the start, the characters are well designed and the writing is very good. as of now (ch60+) I Don't have any complaints aside from when will the romance begin . the thing I liked the most about this book is the world building and how each character that joins the mc is attachable. thanks for the great book and keep producing chapter author sama

2yr
MajorLove_Gravy
MajorLove_GravyLv4

Don't know what to say really. The grammar is poor, many mistakes that are repeated but the author asks not to mind them. I wouldn't mind them if they were fixed later but they aren't, author desperately needs an editor to make the story coherent and even change words as the author uses completely wrong words at times. The story itself is bland, very average with poor pacing and even poorer character development. Everything is just thrown into your face suddenly and then disappears and you're just supposed to forget about it. The characters are very 2 dimensional, they are in the story to serve one specific purpose without question. Overall the story is bland, poor writing, and poor characters. The world is pretty cool though

2yr
Carbon_6597
Carbon_6597Lv14

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Cj_The_Depressed
Cj_The_DepressedLv4

1-no harem 2-mc is cool 3-Adonis -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

2yr
Relz
RelzLv15

The book was amazing at the start. When he was still just an author living in the world he created. It was an awesome book. Just what I've always wanted.But once he moved on to bigger things and kinda left behind normal humanity it became less entertaining.

1yr
tiredOfLife_Hate
tiredOfLife_HateLv2

l love this! Unlike other stories it has no harem,which I hate. The world view is amazing and the plot gave me motivation to read(I'm currently at chapter 90). I'd totally recommend this to my friend. Amazing job Author-nim.

1yr
somberr
somberrLv12

it's a good book. story building is good. the only thing to improve would be the grammar but the further you go the better it becomes. [img=update]

2yr
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