You should revise the chapter headings, it's not just a bit confusing ____________________________________________________________________________________________________
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LIKEThanks for the advice. I agree the chapters' headings aren't good, they were always intended to act as a placeholder. I'm currently rewriting the story to improve the pacing, AKA cutting about half the content. When I update the old chapters with the new shorter versions, the headings will be better.
Day_By_Day:Thanks for the advice. I agree the chapters' headings aren't good, they were always intended to act as a placeholder. I'm currently rewriting the story to improve the pacing, AKA cutting about half the content. When I update the old chapters with the new shorter versions, the headings will be better.