The quality of the writing is very simple. I assume the author is ESL, if so your english is at a decent level and I wish you the best developing it further through your writing. For native English readers, this will be a tough read, while the grammar is ok, the sentence structure and writing style are very raw.
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LIKEEnglish is my third language, and I use a spell checker and grammar checker, which I realized I have to stop relying on it too much. it changes my sentences a lot and I end up not noticing because I'm too lazy to read what I wrote myself hahaha, but I'll try to improve. thanks for your review! it helps me improve.