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This is probably the most formal and conservative family in the world. The idea of Old Liz getting called Grandma gave me a chuckle.

This all happens a little too quick and easy for him. What's the harm to the story with having it take him months of effort and trial and error to figure out each step, especially with incomplete information.

Love the Kingdom building vibes. Lacks characterisation, would be nice to see a few other characters emerge.

Legend. I didn't realise it was a big deal either. Was surprised by how jarring I found it.

This looks promising but couldn't get into it without speech marks. Seems like only a small problem but brain has been too hardwired. Would you consider going through and fixing the dialogue?

Top notch world building. Introduces a touch of reality to the setting of Skyrim while still enabling the MC an edge.

With the pace of his progression, he'd be insane not to aim at maxing his stats. He's achieving years of progress in the matter of days, in the grand scheme of things, what's another week. However, could be a good idea for him to aim for it but have a complication that forces him to have to lvl up before he can max them. For example, maybe some pressure from his Familia which he is forced to lvl up to deak with.

Fantastic start. Writing quality is great and your characterisation is so far beyond most fics on this site. Please keep this going.

Think Grindelward is the bigger lapse in judgement.

Solid FF. Simple writing style but has minimal mistakes (the plural for Pokemon is also Pokemon, does need an 's'. Cool world building. Characters are a little one dimensional and the banter doesn't fit the age profiles but still a decent read.