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DogLickerGods
DogLickerGodsLv112yr
2022-08-23 12:56

Even though MC is not 100% exposed to NTR, from my point of view it's uncomfortable to see one of the women who is quite close to MC doing it with another guy. Yes, I know she's not the heroine but it's uncomfortable. You might think I just want to read something comfortable, but the average reader on this platform is very wary of NTR elements. So I was wondering why you made Drake and Chiron (MC's Servant) do that... At least if Drake and MC were just casual acquaintances, I wouldn't think too much of it. I know Ein always likes to make books with realistic human relationships, but well... Whatever. I'll give you 5 stars because other than the above issues, the plot and language of this book are pretty good.

One Piece: Wild Hunt

Einlion
3.3
103 Chs

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TOS
TOSLv4

It's the setting that's not realistic. If it was done by a normal resident of that world, I would not have been upset, but It was done by an entity SUMMONED by the MC. That's what is upsetting to me. You can't talk about reality when talking about summons that is supposed to serve you. That's the only problem I have with the novel. It's not the fact that it happened, but the fact that the settings shouldn't allow that to happen. It"s illogical to me.

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MorningWood_Dao
MorningWood_DaoLv5

they serve him but with a condition tho. it's already said that they have their own autonomy aside from needing his mana. from that alone I already know that mc won't get all the female servants as his girl. the setting allowed that. even in the original material, a servant can rebel.

TOS:It's the setting that's not realistic. If it was done by a normal resident of that world, I would not have been upset, but It was done by an entity SUMMONED by the MC. That's what is upsetting to me. You can't talk about reality when talking about summons that is supposed to serve you. That's the only problem I have with the novel. It's not the fact that it happened, but the fact that the settings shouldn't allow that to happen. It"s illogical to me.
1yr
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Mr_Aizen
Mr_AizenLv13

I give it such a low rating for the existence of Drake. If it is true that she does not appear again for hundreds of chapters, I will change it to five stars

2yr

glo_antttt
glo_anttttLv15

if your a man with any type of respect for yourself dont consume this 🗑️🗑️ dropped as of chapter 10 when some disturbing 💩 happens explored most of the comments to find out more of this authors past he’s one of “ those ” guys with “ special “ interest probably didnt have a father in his life or a real manly model because the dude clearly has “special taste” ill just leave it at that no need to go further. although im aware the auther will delete my sincere review soon hopefully i saw a pure soul from being tainted with this 🗑️🗑️ & ill pray the author decovers andrew tate or other red pill men because his dark view on women only applies to weak men which would take a VERY weak man to even come up with this type of 💩 & to go to the lengths this man went for this novel its honestly disgusting!

2yr
Chief_1209
Chief_1209Lv4

I quite liked the idea of the background of the fic by reading the synopsis. But after reading it for some chapter I found the MC and Drake way too annoying. The MC doesn't have a thing called self-esteem. Most if not all the servants summoned by MC did not even give the basic level of respect(that should be given to anyone) to him. I tried giving this book a chance again by trying it again but still it disappointed me.

2yr
YoStopReading
YoStopReadingLv2

I will rate 4 stars even though I hate Drake (not for what she did, but with how she rubbed it in the MC's face after lol) and how she manipulates MC. But as soon as MC loses his dignity and gets with her even for one time then im out lol. Love your stories I just really hate Drake. My opinion would be the same even if she wasn't so "free" with her relationships lol it's her character that's the problem

2yr
Wheeler4784
Wheeler4784Lv13

Reveal spoiler

2yr
ApoloJackson
ApoloJacksonLv1

Einlion managed with this work to elevate everything bad in his writing. Uninteresting characters, idiotic plot and above all an unbearable character like Drake who only exists to generate gratuitous hate. Seriously, at these times I remember Freya's scene in her Danmachi work, where the MC watches and helps her with Ottar and then she ends up becoming a romantic interest. at these times I realize that it could be a fetish of the author, without conditions, since it does not add anything to the text and only serves to generate negative emotions in the reader.

2yr
Clerith
ClerithLv1

Of all the stories I've ever read on this site, this one upset me the most. It evoked a deep, visceral emotion that toed the line between hate, frustration and disgust. I read till chapter 40. And honestly... Drake's right about most of the things she says about the MC, and I absolutely hate it. I hate the way the author chose to write her, and the MC. Drake completely ruined the story for me, on a fundamental level. Her, and the later Straw Hat plot direction. The story evoked very strong feelings in me, but unfortunately, they were mostly negative. If you want to see a REALISTIC fat useless otaku insert into the world... give it a try. But be prepared for what that realistic word really contains.

2yr
Gomuningen
GomuningenLv14

I’m generally a fan of Ein’s works, but this one was completely infuriating. The writing quality is great and the grammar is as good as always but the MC seems to be the most annoying, passive, doormat character ever. It also seems that the whole thing is like a competition on making the MC’s life hard. First of all the MC and his crew cannot use ANY haki at all since he is apparently not a native of the world, but the weakness of his devil fruit still applies. Also while he cannot use haki, it Seema that the people of one piece can somehow miraculously use mana to operate the ‘install cards’ that were randomly introduced and distributed to random people. To top it all off, the MC goes around telling everyone he just met about his devil fruit abilities and it seems after spending a short time with people he also tells them about his transmigration and all of the knowledge he has related to them.

2yr
Winter_Whisperer
Winter_WhispererLv4

A bit hesitant about the mana-mana no mi. But I have faith in your glorious foot to write us another masterpiece. So a full star from me👍😁

2yr
slimane
slimaneLv3

trash loser Mc that happend to be happy withe drake cocklod him 888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888

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