webnovel
DogLickerGods
DogLickerGodsLv112yr
2022-08-23 12:56

Even though MC is not 100% exposed to NTR, from my point of view it's uncomfortable to see one of the women who is quite close to MC doing it with another guy. Yes, I know she's not the heroine but it's uncomfortable. You might think I just want to read something comfortable, but the average reader on this platform is very wary of NTR elements. So I was wondering why you made Drake and Chiron (MC's Servant) do that... At least if Drake and MC were just casual acquaintances, I wouldn't think too much of it. I know Ein always likes to make books with realistic human relationships, but well... Whatever. I'll give you 5 stars because other than the above issues, the plot and language of this book are pretty good.

Liked by 20 people

LIKE
Replies2
TOS
TOSLv4

It's the setting that's not realistic. If it was done by a normal resident of that world, I would not have been upset, but It was done by an entity SUMMONED by the MC. That's what is upsetting to me. You can't talk about reality when talking about summons that is supposed to serve you. That's the only problem I have with the novel. It's not the fact that it happened, but the fact that the settings shouldn't allow that to happen. It"s illogical to me.

MorningWood_Dao
MorningWood_DaoLv5

they serve him but with a condition tho. it's already said that they have their own autonomy aside from needing his mana. from that alone I already know that mc won't get all the female servants as his girl. the setting allowed that. even in the original material, a servant can rebel.

TOS:It's the setting that's not realistic. If it was done by a normal resident of that world, I would not have been upset, but It was done by an entity SUMMONED by the MC. That's what is upsetting to me. You can't talk about reality when talking about summons that is supposed to serve you. That's the only problem I have with the novel. It's not the fact that it happened, but the fact that the settings shouldn't allow that to happen. It"s illogical to me.
Other Reviews
Wheeler4784
Wheeler4784Lv13
Related Stories

One Piece - I Am A Different Luffy!

He is Monkey D. Luffy, but not the original Monkey D. Luffy, because in this world, that one is Lucy, his blood sister, while he had a peaceful childhood with his other three brothers. They all ended up following different paths since he didn’t have his memories. It was only when he entered a barrel lost at sea to save himself that he finally began to regain all the knowledge he had of this world from his past life. On top of that, he realized he could use this knowledge to his advantage to acquire everything he needed on his adventure. He was given four chances to summon people to start his journey, and more importantly, he finally received his two devil fruits, becoming powerful from the very beginning, with a plan that stretched to the end of his adventure. This story is the adventure of a man called Monkey D. Luffy, with the goal of becoming the emperor of all the seas in the world. For that, he will find the One Piece and destroy the World Government, for they cannot coexist. Be it the Marines, government agents, CP units, Tenryuubito, Holy Knights, Gorosei, or Im, Luffy will walk over a mountain of corpses. “I want you in my crew. Together, we will change the whole world and turn it upside down.” “Hahaha. Don’t worry, I believe in your potential, that's why I want you in my crew.” “My swordsman already fought you and lost. Now let’s see the strength of the world’s greatest swordsman too, right, Yamato? I hope you don’t mind fighting two rookies at once...?” “Awaken... Awaken my power... and destroy all your enemies...” “It’s good to see you after so long, Grandpa... and you, sister.” “Monkey D.? The most dangerous family in the world!” “Isn’t it a beautiful scene? Two Shichibukai and a Vice Admiral as my trophies! Come on, take a good picture and put it on tomorrow’s newspaper cover!” “I declare this kingdom my territory!” “Enel, you’re nothing but an idiot with a god complex. If you’re a god... then I’m a god slayer.” “As you said, Teach, people’s dreams never end! And if people’s dreams never end, why should I stop?” “Doflamingo... Jake... you’re so far from home. I hope you don’t regret this.” "You narcissistic woman, how can someone be so annoying and arrogant?" "What did you say, you damned man?!" "I now declare you husband and wife." "It's time to return to the Blue Sea, after all, we have a world to shake." "CP9? What a disappointment, Sengoku. I want money for them and Doflamingo... I want 2 billion berries at Enies Lobby in a few days." "Enies Lobby was completely destroyed...?" "I've fought Mihawk, Jimbei, Crocodile, Doflamingo, Hancock, and Moria... you're the only one left, Kuma..." "It seems we've finally met, Rayleigh..." "Let's invade Impel Down!" "I came here to find you, sister, it's time for you to join my crew... Joygirl..." "It looks like we've finally arrived at the war." "Sengoku... you tried to arm yourself to execute my brother, so I'll make an example of this Tenryuubito for the whole world." "You can't do this...!" *BANG!* "He actually did it, that bastard...." "Your chains are loose, move your ass and get out of Marineford!!" "Saturn!!! I'M GOING TO KILL YOU!!" "I couldn't kill you last time, Akainu... but I'll make sure to do it now." "Destroy the rest of Marineford." "Let's get out of here. When you return, you'll take over this country for your family, Rebecca." "No matter if we're on opposite sides... I will always love you, grandpa." "It's time to start our training." "Let's begin. Now, let's head to the New World, capture territories, and grow our fleet." "Is the entire Straw Hat fleet ready? Now let's head to Wano, after all, we have a war against two Yonkou!" -------------------------------------------- This Fanfic's Schedule for the week, updates on: Monday, Thursday, and Saturday. ----------------------------------------------

RaccoonLeague · Anime & Comics
4.8
499 Chs