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AshleyJohnson_8641Lv142yr
2022-10-11 08:56

The only problem I have with the story is that there is no clear distinction between the characters in her families older and younger generation.

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One of the lowest rated books I ever read. The translation and editing quality needs to be greatly improved. Too many errors that made it look like one is reading a MTL book. Second, characters are annoying especially the FL, Li Fu’Er. She transmigrated from modern times with medical knowledge and yet for her entire 12 years of living in ancient times, she did not do anything to improve her life! Her character is so pretentious. What’s with her not talking much etc.?! Other FL in this junction of the story would start counter-attacking even if it’s not a big move. Their small moves would make these shameless scums suffer and drink a lot of bitterness and suffering. Ha! But she’s better! She only thought of sewing her family’s lips to shut them up or use her new needles on them. But in the end, nothing was done. They talk too much nonsense. This FL is something else too. She does not seem to have clear distinction of the villain Li Yan’Er who killed her. She just watched her play and act in front of her. This FL can’t even insert a word when the GLB Yan’er talks to to others. It was annoying and aggravating to read!🤬🤬🤬 Her dad is terribly weak and a coward. He watched his daughter be abused, starved and almost died several times for 12 years. He watched her be sent to the kennel to live, sleep and wake up with the smell of pigs etc. his meager and pathetic attempts to show his love is laughable! He always sides with his family especially his parents and the GLB Yan’er over his own daughter! Even when all the facts were there, he was still not angry enough to vent for his daughter!🤬🤬🤬. A truly pathetic excuse for a father. Only merit?! Probably he didn’t remarry after FL mom died. Her mom was better since she insisted on making sure FL’s name if FU’ER. Li Yan’er is a reborn character. She coveted FL belongings and fortune. She has the FL’s pendant though up to now, it was not explained what the pendant was for. The to Li girls have second chances in life but knows two different stories. For Yan’er, FU’ER will marry Prince Ning. For FU’ER, Yan’er should have been reborn around the time of the start of the story and that Yan’er was the FL of the book she read. This book is now her current life. Even the raws are too wordy and has too much nonsense. FL remains annoying and her dad is the same! The villains, Yan’er and Their grandma Li Wang are more vivid!🤬 Not worth reading even the raws. The FL who transmigrated as babies and toddlers did better than this FL who knows medicine and also came from modern times! Plot is annoying and aggravating to read. Better to read A’Yu’s story or the previous stories of FL with a mall or the Couple who transmigrated together with supplies. They have better plot and better interactions between characters!

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