Review Detail of CaptainJerkOff in The Slytherin Magus

The idea of a post canon Slytherin is incredibly ingenious one. However reading through this isn't enjoyable, it becomes a chore. Why is this? Other than the character's passive behaviour ( I dunno why he didn't leave Hogwarts, he didn't have any attachement there and it worsen his psyche). Of course there is the scene where he becomes a fugitive. There is no satisfaction when you finish that ark, you just go "3 years later", gah. Boring mc, stupid decisions, and no satisfaction. Removing the OOC system is great idea, it allows for a more flexible character development. Kudos for you.