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mutekishifu
mutekishifuLv51yrmutekishifu

when i saw this fafic for the first time i thought wow because it has 60 chapters and doesn't seem to have good ratings, i'll say at first this was fun, but the other one nerfed the MC too much, 2 years of training and kaioken only goes up to 2x, even training 2 years and knowing 10 martial arts he has problems dealing with yang (she is 1 year before the beginning of the plot), man I don't know if you're a fan of RWBY anymore it is clear that she only knows how to punch simple and kick simple. (this part was disappointing). I understand why there are not so many people following this fanfic is because it's so boring it's so nerfed that it's forced. like in mistral he even drove away cinder (the woman who killed the protagonist's mother, you don't know who is the only greatest hunter in the valley and one of the top 5 in the world) and then he says he has difficulty with yang, it doesn't make sense, I wish the author luck but if you're going to do a new romance please do something better than that

RWBY Ultimate Fighter

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toby_gwack
toby_gwackAuthortoby_gwack

Thank you for your opinion, as I have already said it is the first that I write so I know very well that it will be far from perfect even if several points that you mention have already been explained, thank you for reading I hope that you will find your happiness elsewhere.

Tokyoghost
TokyoghostLv4Tokyoghost

wait cinder killed ruby mother? I thought it was Salem

mutekishifu
mutekishifuLv5mutekishifu

sorry for the spoiler, ruby's mother was a lady with magic, cinder killed ruby's mother and stole the magic

Tokyoghost:wait cinder killed ruby mother? I thought it was Salem
Tokyoghost
TokyoghostLv4Tokyoghost

it's all good

mutekishifu:sorry for the spoiler, ruby's mother was a lady with magic, cinder killed ruby's mother and stole the magic
MaliciousIronHill
MaliciousIronHillLv1MaliciousIronHill

Wasn't that Salem that killed her off and Cinder that ended up inheriting the powers?

mutekishifu:sorry for the spoiler, ruby's mother was a lady with magic, cinder killed ruby's mother and stole the magic