The writing quality is consistently good, grammar and sentence structure keeping up with supreme standards compared to 90% of stories on this platform, very little editing would be required to fully publish this. The updates are timely and feel right with just enough time between each update. Story development and character design are following a pretty good path with very real choices I feel the MC has to make to develop in this type of environment. As fanfictions go, I honestly didn't see myself enjoying a walking dead one as this is literally the only decent one there is. But I have come to enjoy every moment of reading penny build something from nothing and the challenges of the original story / some of the author's own twists and turns. I would like to see a little more original content but I realize the story really hasn't really exited it's initial setup. Anyways, take all my power stones author and keep up the good work.
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