Animetine

she.

she, again.

ace is a she.

you're an idiot. how is that decent? he literally writes like conan the barbarian, it's entirely written in ungabunga.

author is literally illiterate, heavy editing required to understand anything.

If I have one, how powerful will it be?*

what an origin talent is*

a bit high in the tank?

The writing is terrible, plagued with typos and mysterious nuances. A lot of the story is just cringey dialog about how great he is and how his trolling skills are next level, plus the constant flex that he's beautiful but apparently too good for other people? why wish for it if you just wanted to use it to tell yourself how cringey other people are being for being attracted to you? the story feels bland and all over the place the mc is terribly written and he makes Bella this bipolar schizo. It updates regularly, though, and obviously, it's a fanfic, so if you've read or watched the original, you have a clear outlook of what the world's like. Though if you're a first timer, the author does terribly describing everything.

the writing could use a little editing, but I'm loving the story so far. keep up the good work author.