Animetine

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really should edit this one. seems weird to repeat what she said. don't let the ai do all the work.

loving the story so far. any plans on a patre.on?

I'm honestly surprised with this one. I love the story so far, the pain is good the chapter lengths are longer than 90 percent of what's on webnovel and the story is original. love that you used the Phoenix fruit, it honestly fits with the universe of teen wolf. the mc is also likeable while not sex crazed like most people make their stories. overall I'm looking forward to this story, author San, please start up a patreo..n with a couple advanced chapters I'd like to read more and I'm willing to pay for it. love this novel so far!!!!

surface of the sun? a quick Google search says the atmosphere alone is nearly 10k degrees celcius. which is 18k degrees Fahrenheit. the actual surface and core are measured in Kelvin because of the ludicrous temperatures reaching the millions in celcius. you put him at 4k.

how does stryker know about limitless? there were no drones there until after the fight. He only saw blue. Nowhere does it show him observing this ability. dumb.

chapters feel like they're getting shorter... this was honestly a bit disappointing. He's also being a little pushy with someone's little brother that he has literally known for a day? it's a bit weird. like, he's honestly pushed his way into her life thus far. also, why keep hopping back and forth with the food thing? is he gonna cook or order food? overall this chapter felt veeeeeery rushed and super forced.

ignore the vermin daoist cornbringer. This is like top of my reading list because it's purely original. Danzo is a pest and him killing the mc's parents? totally believable. He is both an opportunist and a terrible plotter. Isolating the mc is well within his m/o to potentially try and recruit him. Especially with him blaming the Uchiha during Canon? Wouldn't put it past him to try to get our little mc to try and believe it was the nine tails controlled by fugaku to try and isolate him more. essentially this is definitely something I can see dummy danzo doin.

no

the perspective of the writing switches randomly, so much so that even the author can't keep track in who is talking which is clear within the first five chapters. the mc also is a little one dimensional, he literally just acts Like homelander except with fore knowledge of the series. so that's just lame. the grammar is also bad. the world building doesn't really set you up either unless you have personally seen the series. overall I would not give this story much attention.