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Crazy_Ume
Crazy_UmeLv32yr
2022-08-29 15:42

5 chapters in! Time for a review! This story's got quite an interesting start and it helped making the readers anticipate what could be coming next Instead of starting of with world introduction or setting introduction, you got to the action right away which is clever! I also like how you slowly introduce the characters and stuff after that It's quite refreshing for this genre! Still, the story could use some more researchs on Japanese cultures and naming, so that it sounds more convincing, now that the cast still feel a bit Western and could confuse some readers. btw keep up the good work, author! You're doing great! 🥺👍💖

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