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PeryiteLv51yr
2023-07-28 06:14

Instead of putting auto five stars cause it’s adventure time ima give my honest opinion the author seems indecisive in some choices examples are the class and all that stuff somethin I find weird is his character design he’s to young to be lookin like that even if you don’t update the story anymore at least have some standards to do a time skip before you start making him look like a 18 year old and the relationship is pretty forced he makes up a story about how he got a vision of the future where Gumball and The vamp who’s name I’m not spelling are his girlfriends overall it’s about a two star novel but it’s adventure time so 3

I'm Finn Mertens and I've Become a Player!

EldarGlorfindel
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14 Chs

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EldarGlorfindel
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1o: Something you have to keep in mind from the beginning is that English is not my native language. Please forgive me for any mistakes. 2º: As for the pairings. Well, I think you already know ... ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) 3º: I will try to merge the world of Time of Adventure with The Game. 4º: I will try to put other people's point of view, but I'm not very good at that kind of thing. I can try, but I won't promise. 5º: Happy reading!

2yr

DumbWeeb11
DumbWeeb11Lv4

Absolutely amazing!!I havent seen Adventure Time in a long time but I still love this concept and what you have done wit it. The grammar is perfect. The characters feel real and not like cardboard cutouts. I cant say much about story and updating but I do hope you update daily. I cant say much about World backround because it ony has 3 chaps but its looking good. Overall its an amazing novel and I hope you dont drop it.

2yr
Holo_Lover
Holo_LoverLv2

I don't know much about Adventure Time, but I know it's a very interesting universe and full of things to explore. I really liked what I've read so far. I just hope this doesn't become a Harem +18. And there aren't too many problems with your grammar, and even if it was bad, 99% of fan-fic readers don't really care about it. Overall, I hope to be able to read more in the future.

2yr
foodieToodie
foodieToodieLv4

So far it's been pretty good I'll be honest I didn't really have any hopes on this being good but you knocked it out of the park amazing job Author-kun

2yr
SalmonFish
SalmonFishLv4

Author, please do not drop this. Frankly, seeing such a well written story on a fanfic of adventure time in just ‘chef’s kiss’. Please continue being yourself and writing such wonderful chapters. - A salmon[img=recommend]

2yr
Bruno_Yuran
Bruno_YuranLv1

I'm Mozambican and I only know the basics of English grammar so I'm sorry if my review is difficult to understand. This is first the only adventure time story I found after so much searching, I was stuck from the first to the last chapter I'm looking forward to more chapters, the character so far is being well built I just hope it doesn't turn into a harem with Finn getting one lot of princesses. The construction of the other characters does not deviate from what I already knew, so it gives one more point for the story, frequent updating is worth one more point... in conclusion, it's a story worth reading

2yr
Saber77
Saber77Lv5

GREAT[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2yr
TurkishHentai
TurkishHentaiLv1

The Adventure Time novel is amazing. I hope the author continues to update every day. It has been a long time since I've read such a high quality novel.

2yr
Thehighesthol1
Thehighesthol1Lv1

This FF is very interesting because I've never seen an adventure time fan fiction and mc doesn't seem naive and smart .......................................................

2yr
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