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Bruno_Yuran
Bruno_YuranLv12yr
2022-08-11 13:34

I'm Mozambican and I only know the basics of English grammar so I'm sorry if my review is difficult to understand. This is first the only adventure time story I found after so much searching, I was stuck from the first to the last chapter I'm looking forward to more chapters, the character so far is being well built I just hope it doesn't turn into a harem with Finn getting one lot of princesses. The construction of the other characters does not deviate from what I already knew, so it gives one more point for the story, frequent updating is worth one more point... in conclusion, it's a story worth reading

I'm Finn Mertens and I've Become a Player!

EldarGlorfindel
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14 Chs

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EldarGlorfindel
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1o: Something you have to keep in mind from the beginning is that English is not my native language. Please forgive me for any mistakes. 2º: As for the pairings. Well, I think you already know ... ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) 3º: I will try to merge the world of Time of Adventure with The Game. 4º: I will try to put other people's point of view, but I'm not very good at that kind of thing. I can try, but I won't promise. 5º: Happy reading!

2yr

Peryite
PeryiteLv5

Reveal spoiler

1yr
DumbWeeb11
DumbWeeb11Lv4

Absolutely amazing!!I havent seen Adventure Time in a long time but I still love this concept and what you have done wit it. The grammar is perfect. The characters feel real and not like cardboard cutouts. I cant say much about story and updating but I do hope you update daily. I cant say much about World backround because it ony has 3 chaps but its looking good. Overall its an amazing novel and I hope you dont drop it.

2yr
Holo_Lover
Holo_LoverLv2

I don't know much about Adventure Time, but I know it's a very interesting universe and full of things to explore. I really liked what I've read so far. I just hope this doesn't become a Harem +18. And there aren't too many problems with your grammar, and even if it was bad, 99% of fan-fic readers don't really care about it. Overall, I hope to be able to read more in the future.

2yr
foodieToodie
foodieToodieLv4

So far it's been pretty good I'll be honest I didn't really have any hopes on this being good but you knocked it out of the park amazing job Author-kun

2yr
SalmonFish
SalmonFishLv4

Author, please do not drop this. Frankly, seeing such a well written story on a fanfic of adventure time in just ‘chef’s kiss’. Please continue being yourself and writing such wonderful chapters. - A salmon[img=recommend]

2yr
Saber77
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2yr
GoldenNuggett
GoldenNuggettLv1

The Adventure Time novel is amazing. I hope the author continues to update every day. It has been a long time since I've read such a high quality novel.

2yr
Thehighesthol1
Thehighesthol1Lv1

This FF is very interesting because I've never seen an adventure time fan fiction and mc doesn't seem naive and smart .......................................................

2yr
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