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Linnor
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2022-08-06 12:52

well i think you need to stick with the story so far about slice of live romance. dont fokus about future harem and dont put in fantasy story or powerful woman in the harem. just make it like normal life. if he get power or sistem or become non human the story will get more complicated. it will make the story harder for you to write. thank for the the good story so far. keep the hard work[img=recommend]

Stealing Heroine: Honestly, I never thought this far. (R-18)

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Yeah, that's good point. I'm just a bit bored with FF with system.

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