well i think you need to stick with the story so far about slice of live romance. dont fokus about future harem and dont put in fantasy story or powerful woman in the harem. just make it like normal life. if he get power or sistem or become non human the story will get more complicated. it will make the story harder for you to write. thank for the the good story so far. keep the hard work[img=recommend]

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I hate ntr but this isnt that yet and i hope it stays that way. eriris story was kinda wholesome to the end(cant believe i said that), and i hope you dont go to extremes and try to make every girl as wholesome to the end as possible

Автор, ваша работа прекрасна!) Очень редко можно найти что-то стоящее. Взаимоотношения персонажей 5*. Миры (аниме), которые вы выбрали, мне тоже понравились.

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