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2022-08-03 17:25

Nice and fresh story l must say.... Loved the character tina and kunle... Also how kunle is in love at first sight kinda things... Its really satisfying... But one thing l must say is.... It is really confusing to read the dialogues as it is not seperate from the other expressions or the sentences..... You should have use apostophy ( " ) to seperate the dialogues.... Other than that everything is nice and interesting... Keep going...

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