The story is great, although there are some improvements that needs to be done - just a little bit - but, all in all, it was good. Author did great. Good luck with the competition!😊🧡
maylily_jk
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LIKEmaylily_jk:Thank you for your review 😊 hope you will add the story in your Library and keep on commenting on the coming chapters.