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the author is trying. I'll give them that. but they present no mystery with new characters. introducing each as if they where the main character. the presentation of the writing and story is rather choppy. while it is a nice precedence, the choppyness makes this unreadable for me. I will continue to check back for edits though in hopes of improvement from the author.
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JOSH_ONE
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I'm glad you take it well. the most straightforward thing I could tell you is to do big details with new characters and slowly reveal smaller more important details. for example I have already forgotten the name of one character but he stands out in my mind as "Blood Warrior". (you can absolutely use that if you want) but start with things like that. you started writing from the perspective of out main character and two other people. his rival and the tribe person(who I pictured as our lorekeeper) you have a g[od start and a good world. it just needs some polish
JOSH_ONE:thank you for the review! Though this is my first time writing a novel like this, I highly appreciate the criticism. Thank you again🙏🏽🙏🏽
Wywildman92:I'm glad you take it well. the most straightforward thing I could tell you is to do big details with new characters and slowly reveal smaller more important details. for example I have already forgotten the name of one character but he stands out in my mind as "Blood Warrior". (you can absolutely use that if you want) but start with things like that. you started writing from the perspective of out main character and two other people. his rival and the tribe person(who I pictured as our lorekeeper) you have a g[od start and a good world. it just needs some polish