See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

I'm glad you take it well. the most straightforward thing I could tell you is to do big details with new characters and slowly reveal smaller more important details. for example I have already forgotten the name of one character but he stands out in my mind as "Blood Warrior". (you can absolutely use that if you want) but start with things like that. you started writing from the perspective of out main character and two other people. his rival and the tribe person(who I pictured as our lorekeeper) you have a g[od start and a good world. it just needs some polish

the author is trying. I'll give them that. but they present no mystery with new characters. introducing each as if they where the main character. the presentation of the writing and story is rather choppy. while it is a nice precedence, the choppyness makes this unreadable for me. I will continue to check back for edits though in hopes of improvement from the author.

Legion. your number one priority should be your health. that will keep Supreme Magus updating!

the author can not stay consistent at all. in one chapter he changed the name of a skill 4 times. at one point it was 2 times in the same sentence.

a little choppy in writing and story progression but a well developing world and a mc with a well rounded personality that's easy to understand but not overwhelming.

if I recall, werewolf is a controllable but deadly and dumb subspecies that evolves or is related to the wendigo.

I love the fact that Arthure is just a kind man like, "what, oh? you need a fish to go hunting? okay sure. oh, I need to do something? I'll throw a rock... why am I throwing diamonds?" just following senile grandpa Arthure is fun!

okay, you have many great points. I guess I would "finish" my thoughts on the matter with this. most people complaining are veteran readers. I do hope I worded it correctly but I will try again, He accepted the pressure put on him by the readers, this fault lies with him, but also with readers who think that they have a say in how His story goes. yes he failed, yes he promised a lot. ueas he could do better. but, so can we as readers and fans do a better job at supporting him(not just financially) he is not the same as the dude building your garage. he is an artist, trust his process at least a little. that is all, I hope I have my personal standpoint clear. ie if you are complaining loudly in the comments, please be sure that you use constructive criticism and are not just badmouthing people and the author. (i have tried to do as much please let me know if I have failed in this and if so I apologize to those who I have wronged)

I did try to communicate that I do not disagree with the points you have stated. he has promised a lot not not held up to that. I also point out though that Some(not all) of that comes from pressure from the readers. thats the business model of this site, please the readers or stop makining money. as for the point of struggling to make money, if you(or others) can't make financially sound decisions, that is not his fault. lon story and argument short, yes I wish he would make less promises and just focus on the story. its worth it. but I also believe that readers need to stop begging like spoiled brats for a "mass release" then complain about chapter content, beg for "better story" then complain about low chapter count. let him write his story. we just enjoy it.

so, besides the fact that you think no one cares. let's look at the big picture. 1. from your grammer it sounds like you are from America like myself (assumption yes I know but roll with me here) 2. JKS(author) is from China.... 3. time difference pluse previous announcements about further meetings with people to make the manga. 4. yes, he set the bar high, maybe a little to high for him to reach right now but it's up there. I think that putting that kind of pressure on himself shows that he cares. 5. your in privilege section bub, you spent the coins because you enjoy the story, I did too. and I support on patreon. 6. he is also writing the equivalent of 3 other books besides this one. what I'm getting at is that people who pay to rant on the most recent chapter are half (not entirely the whole) reason he puts this kind of pressure on himself. so instead of ranting about him being a "theif". let's remind him that we just want the story to continue and he needs to make sure that it is manageable for him. the more comfortable he feels, the easier the chapters will come to him. and yes promising mass release is nice. but a surprise mass release is better. thanks for coming to my Ted talk...

Logan! what a little genius scammer!

I called it! don't remember how many chapters ago but I called Fex's soul/blood weopon!

blood weapons need human blood to activate right? umm, is eagle man going to be okay?

solid point!

is Leo gonna go rage mode on him? or is Erin gonna show why Dhampirs are to be feared!

its going to show her dhampir powers, and they gonna ask for her life...

I love a good just desserts story... and Leo delivers it nice and hot!

a few points to make. 1. Rowan is a known entity to the upper class of Vamps. 2. this means it's definitely not Bryce. 3. this fight against the bloodsuckers could be what unites the Vampire community with and probably behind Quinn when he comes back to turn them all into xp... 4.Erin is in trouble for the chance to have her powers/identity revealed. 5. and the most important, Rowan is correct there is a large power that will topple the Vampires, it is just not who he is thinking of!

can Erin come rescue Silver please?