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Honestly I’ve been looking for a danganronpa fanfiction like this for a hella long time, this is easily in the top ten danganronpa fanfiction I’ve read the first one going to “The Luckster and his luck” by the “Jibster”. I eagerly await your next update Author-sama

It's actually a good fanfic. Love the idea of reborn as a character out of the main cast. This character have an story with Junko in the Canon so it's going to be interesting to see how he will develop that here.

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The story is good but the writing style is abhorrent. I suggest reading some writing tips in Google, or copying the writing style of other famous works to improve. I had problems reading because there is too many unnecessary details such as what the MC is looking at or other rephrased words in the same paragraph. If you could condense the message and get straight to the point for example: 'I opened the door and went out.' Not: 'I turned the doorknob and pulled the door open, then, looking at the apartment one last time, I closed it.' Your writing isn't even that immersive so there is no point in adding pointless details. Overall, it's good. Just fix the writing style and grammar and your set.

I love danganronpa and this fanfic is really good though it is a bit of a slow read but if you have the time I would give it a chance. I give it 3.5 mukuro’s out of 5.

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WARNING THERE IS SLIGHT VIOLATION (the author gave a vague warning see this story with this warning) So much potential thrown away and all for not putting at least a warning that there will be a slight violation (groping and that kind of thing I don't know if there was insertion but I got so sick that I didn't want to finish reading the chapter my stomach turned from how disgusting that was felt) and honestly it was unnecessary but what disappointed me most was that "warning" that honestly is very vague and the disgusting thing about the scene by God is a minor is very sick (although everything they have to do with it is sick) I honestly put this comment due to lack of communication, because of the horrible scene and to give a better warning and not something And surely I will leave this account so as not to have anything to do with this story I seriously got sick with this (you were doing so well what a disappointment)

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