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YoungSnipe
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2022-11-05 09:54

Honestly the overall story and plot is quite good, and the world building and background is also intriguing. However the author seriously needs an editor, like it is so annoying to read I couldn’t get past the first 10 chapters even though the premise is so interesting. It’s really a pity. Like the repetition is real like it seems like at least half of the chapter is filler to just bring up the world count. Overall it’s a 3.8 from me chief.

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VOID_
VOID_Lv11

check out Rise of the Infinite Sovereign

YoungSnipe
YoungSnipeLv13

Lol, shamelessly plugging your own novel? Or is it actually a similar premise but, much better writing quality?

VOID_:check out Rise of the Infinite Sovereign
SmellyCow
SmellyCowLv10

no, i checked it's his own novel, a cliché one from what I can read in the synopsis

YoungSnipe:Lol, shamelessly plugging your own novel? Or is it actually a similar premise but, much better writing quality?
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