Sometimes you just get the feeling of "Fine, I'll do it myself" and that's what happened here. I know it may not be everyone's cup of tea, but I'd like to think I've come quite far since I first started my journey in writing. I won't say this is the culmination of everything I've learned, but it most definitely is one of the stories I've sunk the most effort into working on so far. Hope you guys enjoy your stay!
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If you want to know more tropes and how 'not' to handle it, I recommend check 'terrible writing advice' here for more idea (it fun and give useful advice in sarcastic way, if you want the honest version you can check in the older video where there are a link in video description, it will go to his site there so you can check which topic he cover with actual honest advice)
lluv u author, keep working hard, take it easy sometimes aswell, also I luv u
MC is a fu*a, just saying, it is only known by chapter 20, so beware
that more amazing!!!!!
ByteZeroOne:MC is a fu*a, just saying, it is only known by chapter 20, so beware
well, he has va*ina and he said that there might be other fu*as in the ha*m, what is worse is that he said he liked girls like 3 times in 2-3 paragraphs back to back, so not really convincing, go for it, if it is what you like
YAGOOEMON:that more amazing!!!!!image
Writer-San, are you going to do something about Aster mother? The character is soulless and always reacts the same. Please show more of your characters' feelings and thoughts.
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Re_shin:Writer-San, are you going to do something about Aster mother? The character is soulless and always reacts the same. Please show more of your characters' feelings and thoughts.
Hii Bro Mc Male Or Female?
both
Celestial_Chaos24:Hii Bro Mc Male Or Female?
when will mc have r scene
Ngl I feel like the overpowered tag doesn’t match the story so far.
BAM_AMVS:when will mc have r scene
both, down male up female
Celestial_Chaos24:Hii Bro Mc Male Or Female?
How big is the ”slice of life” element?
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little_joe:bothimage
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yamete_kudasai:🤮🤮
I was feeling it till you added other people with him i'm not a fan of that i like one person MC's not everyone who died
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fyi author, i am currently making an interactive version of your CYOA, the images alone don't cut it for me. I am almost done. I can post it to your discord when it is finished. so much work though, i thought it would take a few hours, but i have been at it for 3 days, working most of the day, and i still haven't got to the pilgrimage page.
I really want to read this book but can't afford it
