webnovel
Draekai
DraekaiAuthor2yr
2022-08-16 14:33

Sometimes you just get the feeling of "Fine, I'll do it myself" and that's what happened here. I know it may not be everyone's cup of tea, but I'd like to think I've come quite far since I first started my journey in writing. I won't say this is the culmination of everything I've learned, but it most definitely is one of the stories I've sunk the most effort into working on so far. Hope you guys enjoy your stay!

Liked by 159 people

LIKE
Replies28
ArashiTenebris
ArashiTenebrisLv5

If you want to know more tropes and how 'not' to handle it, I recommend check 'terrible writing advice' here for more idea (it fun and give useful advice in sarcastic way, if you want the honest version you can check in the older video where there are a link in video description, it will go to his site there so you can check which topic he cover with actual honest advice)

GodKingHuruu
GodKingHuruuLv2

lluv u author, keep working hard, take it easy sometimes aswell, also I luv u

ByteZeroOne
ByteZeroOneLv13

MC is a fu*a, just saying, it is only known by chapter 20, so beware

YAGOOEMON
YAGOOEMONLv4

that more amazing!!!!!

ByteZeroOne:MC is a fu*a, just saying, it is only known by chapter 20, so beware
ByteZeroOne
ByteZeroOneLv13

well, he has va*ina and he said that there might be other fu*as in the ha*m, what is worse is that he said he liked girls like 3 times in 2-3 paragraphs back to back, so not really convincing, go for it, if it is what you like

YAGOOEMON:that more amazing!!!!!
image
Re_shin
Re_shinLv3

Writer-San, are you going to do something about Aster mother? The character is soulless and always reacts the same. Please show more of your characters' feelings and thoughts.

Omkar_M_7463
Omkar_M_7463Lv12

ara ara

Re_shin:Writer-San, are you going to do something about Aster mother? The character is soulless and always reacts the same. Please show more of your characters' feelings and thoughts.
Celestial_Chaos24
Celestial_Chaos24Lv4

Hii Bro Mc Male Or Female?

little_joe
little_joeLv13

both

Celestial_Chaos24:Hii Bro Mc Male Or Female?
BAM_AMVS
BAM_AMVSLv4

when will mc have r scene

Novel_detective
Novel_detectiveLv14

Ngl I feel like the overpowered tag doesn’t match the story so far.

Hypnoticyuna
HypnoticyunaLv15

BAM_AMVS:when will mc have r scene
Azrael_DAngel
Azrael_DAngelLv14

both, down male up female

Celestial_Chaos24:Hii Bro Mc Male Or Female?
Javon_Nixon
Javon_NixonLv14

How big is the ”slice of life” element?

yamete_kudasai
yamete_kudasaiLv4

🤮🤮

little_joe:both
image
little_joe
little_joeLv13

😏😏

yamete_kudasai:🤮🤮
VampireDrak
VampireDrakLv13

I was feeling it till you added other people with him i'm not a fan of that i like one person MC's not everyone who died

DaoistW1hE6A
DaoistW1hE6ALv1

goood

William_Claw
William_ClawLv15

fyi author, i am currently making an interactive version of your CYOA, the images alone don't cut it for me. I am almost done. I can post it to your discord when it is finished. so much work though, i thought it would take a few hours, but i have been at it for 3 days, working most of the day, and i still haven't got to the pilgrimage page.

Auro_Ashrit_Rout
Auro_Ashrit_RoutLv2

I really want to read this book but can't afford it

Other Reviews
Related Stories

The Bloodline System

In a future timeline, the earth was visited by a species known as the Slarkovs. Having lost their home planet and in search of a new one, the Earth was the next habitable planet for them. Humans and Slarkovs made a deal with each other in return for the Slarkovs living on Earth. The Slarkovs traded their technology and knowledge for a new home. They were similar to humans except for some of them who had slight differences, so fitting into society wasn't a problem. Over the years, Slarkovs and humans began to mate with one another and reproduce offspring. This, in turn, created new species known as the mixedblood. Centuries later, mixedbloods could tap into their bloodline and perform unimaginable feats. Gustav was born into an age where bloodline determines everything and struggles to fit in with a useless bloodline. His bloodline only grants him the ability to change his hair colour, destroying his hopes and dreams for a great future. His fate is turned around when an unexpected situation leads to him finding a system that grants him the power to unlock and upgrade bloodlines by completing quests, but he's baffled by two quests with a five-year deadline. Success will grant him unimaginable rewards... But only one thing awaits him if he fails... Death! Follow Gustav on his interesting journey filled with unprecedented adventures, danger, and death, maybe? PS: The MC's character growth happens more than once in this story. Join my discord server » https://discord.gg/kSde8pwr

TimVic · Fantasy
4.7
1649 Chs