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2022-08-18 00:37

I read most of what is out there right now, and it looked good at first, had a bit of mystery, the character wanted to find out why he got sent to that world, and it looked like the start of a decent plot, then he started getting random bonuses that he made, before he was sent into the game, then he got more bonuses like 3 chapters after that, and then he got a letter from the guy who sent him there COMPLETELY murdering any sense of mystery there was left, and there are no explanations to any of the game, like he says a nightmare beast is some formidable super beast, and then doesn’t how strong it is, then he gets another bonus which is some fruit to make a nightmare beast have unlimited potential, then he was wondering how he was going to find one, and then he got some faces spins out of nowhere, and won this super overpowered unlimited potential pet, which has super luck, which immediately found a nightmare beast for him. All in all this story is so full of plot holes it makes Swiss cheese look like a whole piece

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Mano a história é boa, gostei muito, mas não deixa de ter alguns furos extremamente desagradáveis. Por exemplo, uma das características essenciais e dominante de legolas é a sua curiosidade sem fim. Entre tanto só depois de mais de três anos desde a sua reencarnação é que ele tentou treinar por conta própria de forma independente do sistema, apesar de saber claramente que tudo não é mais apenas um jogo mais a vida real,um mundo real. Outro furo pesado é que a desculpa, do porquê o reino do príncipe Christensen caiu facilmente é porquê os pais dele só tinha 40% de controle da autoridade, até aí tudo bem, mais logo em seguida ao explicar que os outros 60% está nas mãos dos anciãos e que não irão agir a menos que o reino esteja em perigo. Acabou tornando tudo besteira e um furo imenso. Afinal se ter uma super organização terrorista e psicopata, matando a família real e colocando fantoches para governar não é um perigo catastrófico, o que seria? Um bando de terrorista psicopata está controlando tudo na clareza e por trás dos panos, sem falar que os terroristas são inimigos do mundo inteiro e ser associado a eles tem uma consequência bastante óbvia.

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