Great job author. The epic plot is a attractive element in your story. A good story which makes sure to keeps on curiosity. Waiting for the next update.

I liked the novel very much it showed the POV of every important character which made it more interesting. Please keep your good work up you have my full support

While you give a review kindly use full english, dont use special characters like !, :, ; even .......dots like this are restricted, so kindly if you are going to give review give in full english without any extra symbols

This is the first time I'm reading a story that has perspective based narration. The author tried his best to make each perspective unique and succeeded in it. I Enjoy the way the story is picking up the pace, The characters seems somewhat blunt, more focus on character's details or their nature would be nice.😊 Overall nice start for a potentially great story.

Here's my honest review: I find the story's main characters interesting. I can also see that they are the kind with room for character growth/development. The Author's writing style is a bit new to me though. Not what you would see in most webnovels, but it could be developed over time as that isn't something to be rushed. In all, keep writing and don't give up

Great job author, love the plot, love the tittle, its a good book cant Wait for more chapters[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

you did a great job author I loved your book at first chapter everything is just perfect plot, character you planned everything well you book keep me wanting more and more keep up with the great job

Book good, it have words, and i like words. words make me read more and read good, read make me brain less dumb, and dumb brain bad so want to make brain less dumb, so i like book

The author repeatedly seems to be breaking the forth wall to inform the reader "i believe i know what you're thinking, but this is what actually happened". In the case of Deadpool, it would be humorous since it is weeved into the essence of action scenes and it comes at climatic moments, but the author here seems to address the audience when ever a new scene is about to approach, much like if someone was telling a story to a gathering of children telling them "No Timmy, what I am about to tell you is not what you're thinking" rather than actually writing a narrative that invokes and reels the reader into the world they are now traveling into like: "floating gently on the gleaming lake, the last golden swan rested motionless with its beady eyes darting across the lake's white sandy banks. Every once in a while it would dive out of sight when a twig snapped, fearing that another hunter's spear would meet its mark. Its feathers ruffled just at the thought of its mate who had been impaled a few nights ago."