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Victor_Vaden
Victor_VadenLv132yr
2022-08-04 03:29

Here's my honest review: I find the story's main characters interesting. I can also see that they are the kind with room for character growth/development. The Author's writing style is a bit new to me though. Not what you would see in most webnovels, but it could be developed over time as that isn't something to be rushed. In all, keep writing and don't give up

The Gods Fear- Lucifer

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While you give a review kindly use full english, dont use special characters like !, :, ; even .......dots like this are restricted, so kindly if you are going to give review give in full english without any extra symbols

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