Review Detail of IngridKM in MISTAKE..

At first I thought I was just going to read an ordinary story, but it surprisingly it actually moved me quite a bit, and I love the progressing of the story and I love the story itself. I also like how you designed the personality of the siblings. For the writing quality, it's actually very nice, very detailed that you understand what exactly is going on or even down to the smallest detail. It's just the punctuations and capitalizations I'm kind of not fond of. Overall, would recommend it<3