IngridKM
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IngridKM1yrReplied to aartishankar_21- IngridKM1yrReplied to Flower_Something
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unique and interesting premise and characters. only issue is that there are some punctuational and grammatical errors in some paragraph which may make it a little hard for readers to basically picture it out, but that is something you can easily fix and learn overnight, isn't it? apart from that, this book is essentially perfect and i would love to recommend it and see more chapters in the future. keep going, author! you're doing great!
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YES HAHAHA
"And I don't feel sorry--" - IngridKM1yrReplied to ShadowThief372
- IngridKM1yrCommented
okay first paragraph and i'm liking this already HAHA i like stories written in pov's
The scenery in front of me is that of a sunset. Here I am, sitting on a bench with a girl that I had no recollection of, yet she gave me the feeling of comfort and nostalgia. - IngridKM1yrCommented
whatttttt (i'm loving this so farrrr)
Hold up. Diane felt her eyebrows crawl toward her hairline. "And going by that math, I'm now 20 years old." Diane was 35. If nothing else she knew she could not pass for a 20 year old, not at this time in her life. "Can you please get me a mirror?" - IngridKM1yrCommented
woah
The woman just stared at her, terrified. "Um," she managed, near tears and voice shaking, "Can you please... um. Tell me what exactly a 'phone' looks like? I can request that some merchants bring one for you, but I don't-- I don't know what exactly that is." - IngridKM1yrCommented
i wonder what's going on lmao why the fetishy outfit thoo TwT
The woman just stared at Diane, shocked. "My lady, this--" she looked down at her maid's outfit, which was, admittedly, longer and more conservative than most fetish maid uniforms Diane had come across. "This is my uniform. Do you want to change it? That would be up to your father--" - IngridKM1yrCommented
oh my lord HAHAHA OMG
The woman just stared at Diane, shocked. "My lady, this--" she looked down at her maid's outfit, which was, admittedly, longer and more conservative than most fetish maid uniforms Diane had come across. "This is my uniform. Do you want to change it? That would be up to your father--" - IngridKM1yrCommented
this maidksifkdjgmd omg-
"Thanks," Diane managed, and for whatever reason the maid dropped the glass. It shattered on the floor. God dammit. - IngridKM1yrCommented
omg YES HAHA
"I'm not kidding." Another sigh. If nothing else, Diane was consistent in those. "Can we just play your stupid fucking FPS and enjoy the evening?" Tom grinned. "Gave up the fight for your cringe otome games?" - IngridKM1yrPosted
At first I thought I was just going to read an ordinary story, but it surprisingly it actually moved me quite a bit, and I love the progressing of the story and I love the story itself. I also like how you designed the personality of the siblings. For the writing quality, it's actually very nice, very detailed that you understand what exactly is going on or even down to the smallest detail. It's just the punctuations and capitalizations I'm kind of not fond of. Overall, would recommend it<3
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